Mr.DGAF wrote:Whew. Gonna skip the talley cause I'd give Spyder every category and don't really wanna copy that shit out. Idk, seemed pretty clear cut to me. Wasn't feeling the super sayan bar, the set up was a bit ehhh for me. The Recovery line was sick though, very nicely done. On the other hand, phantom didn't really bring much excitement. The rhymes were decent but there was very little in the way of wordplay and whatnot. Just focus on creating some punchlines man, that's the basis of this stuff. Against guys like Spyder you've gotta come hard with either personals or punches and since you don't know too much about him I think punchlines woulda been the best route.
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