My poem (feedback appreciated) [inspired by MikeFUCN]

[Satire]

idk where to post this lol so im jst goin 2 post it here and tell me wut u guyz think k?

Life is like the coconut I sit on with a park bench
The hard stench of money sits upon the darkness hard less
But sometimes I see the color different, like red
You see it blood, I see blood shed
My messages are clear like butter upon the muffin
People want everything, but really they want nothin
So I love all of my haters and het em like hating you
I'm switchin up my style like Flyin up on a show

[MikeNUFC]

OMG that is so amazing. It's got amazing metaphorical similies and it's really poetic, i totally relate <333

[Satire]

thx i wrote it while i was going thru sum hard x's (dat means times btw)

that means alote cuming from someone as deep & poetic as u i was aiming 2 relate

[Satire]

im a gurl

[Satire]

look b4 u read idiot!

[Satire]

ur such a sexist pig its dumb

just stop and walk away right now because i have a dad that will beat the TARD out of you.

[Satire]

my dad luvs me, so u fail.

gj on lookg like idiot

[Satire]

walk away, anyone with half a brain will see i won this

yah i have a pussy, and u aint gettin NONE of dat. goodbye virgin.

[Devil'sAdvocate]

satire swagged the fuck up

[Master Chief]

idk where to post this lol so im jst goin 2 post it here and tell me wut u guyz think k?

Life is like the coconut I sit on with a park bench
The hard stench of money sits upon the darkness hard less
But sometimes I see the color different, like red
You see it blood, I see blood shed
My messages are clear like butter upon the muffin
People want everything, but really they want nothin
So I love all of my haters and het em like hating you
I'm switchin up my style like Flyin up on a show

[DƎRDYPK]

should of mentioned something about it being friday

[dead prez]