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Is this a good punchline?

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Re: Is this a good punchline?

Postby classthe_king » Feb 4th, '11, 21:42

It doesn't make sense though, why would you strike someone until they are sore with a lisp, it doesn't make sense.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Is this a good punchline?

Postby WakeUpShow » Feb 4th, '11, 21:43

classthe_king wrote:It doesn't make sense though, why would you strike someone until they are sore with a lisp, it doesn't make sense.

haha alright, i got no response, time to watch that 70's show
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Re: Is this a good punchline?

Postby Kez » Feb 4th, '11, 21:53

This thread hurts my brain

imo this obsession with these type of "punchlines" needs to go away, everyone is trying to do them and they aren't even that good. Shit like this is better when it's subtle, instead of this obvious formula you can follow to make them.
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Re: Is this a good punchline?

Postby WakeUpShow » Feb 5th, '11, 05:32

what was obvious about my line.
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