Master Chief said that he is a better writer than me.

[WakeUpShow]

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=105249&p=1473808&hilit=the+stranger#p1473808

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=106523&p=1499591&hilit=blank#p1499591

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=108303&p=1539358&hilit=uncommon+valor#p1539358

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=105788&p=1479824&hilit=population+of#p1479824


those are my pieces. He said they are boring and uninspired. He said that his "Stay Wide Awake" verse is 100x better than those pieces. Here it is:
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=109698&hilit=stay+wide



Am i wrong, or is the most ignorant person for saying that. He is a horrid writer. I have my flaws, but he is just He called my pieces uninspired when his piece which he claims is 100x better he takes about sissy sisters and sixty clippers, while mine have meaning and metaphor.

[Master Chief]

You're such a faggot for making a thread about it. Do you have that low of a self-esteem for your writing that you have to make a thread and ask people about it?

This is truly pathetic. And by the way yes, I am a betterr writer than you. Plus, I just made that shit fucking around, it's not like all I write about is fucking raping and killing people.

This thread is really, really sad...

[classthe_king]

Ummmmmmm

You lose just for making this thread

[WakeUpShow]

You're such a faggot for making a thread about it. Do you have that low of a self-esteem for your writing that you have to make a thread and ask people about it?

This is truly pathetic. And by the way yes, I am a betterr writer than you. Plus, I just made that shit fucking around, it's not like all I write about is fucking raping and killing people.

This thread is really, really sad...

the fact that you said your mumbling was better than concepts that I wrote with a meaning are better than mine got me so fired. you're just wrong. youve been writing for a year and youve gotten worse lol.

[WakeUpShow]

You're such a faggot for making a thread about it. Do you have that low of a self-esteem for your writing that you have to make a thread and ask people about it?

This is truly pathetic. And by the way yes, I am a betterr writer than you. Plus, I just made that shit fucking around, it's not like all I write about is fucking raping and killing people.

This thread is really, really sad...

u know what is sad, that u actually believe u can write....

[WakeUpShow]

Ummmmmmm

You lose just for making this thread

ummmmmmmmm

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[Master Chief]

You're such a faggot for making a thread about it. Do you have that low of a self-esteem for your writing that you have to make a thread and ask people about it?

This is truly pathetic. And by the way yes, I am a betterr writer than you. Plus, I just made that shit fucking around, it's not like all I write about is fucking raping and killing people.

This thread is really, really sad...

the fact that you said your mumbling was better than concepts that I wrote with a meaning are better than mine got me so fired. you're just wrong. youve been writing for a year and youve gotten worse lol.

Your writing > 3 AM by that logic.

My mumbling was a story (more inspired and entertaining than yours) so nope. Honestly, just by making this thread you lose. And the fact you got mad over something I said just lets me know that you are VERY sub-conscious about your writing.

[Block]

I'm better than both of you so it doesn't matter.



On a serious note: Cosh, making a topic like this makes you seem very insecure and desperate. It's almost crying, lol. Just my unbiased observation...


Honestly, unless you're battling or something, there shouldn't be any, "I'm better than you. fuck you, your writing is terrible." Again, for the second time today, I'm going to sound like a peace-loving hippie but, you guys should be helping each other grow as writers. Of course, that doesn't mean you say something is good when it isn't.. But just saying "Fuck off, you suck." doesn't help anyone.

I've gone out of my way to help a lot of writers here (and other sites) with either feedback or personal, one-on-one advice. I could have easily clowned them and forgotten it but that doesn't help hip hop at all. And yeah, writing is a part of hip hop. It eventually (for most people) leads to creating songs and spreading the message.


Save the hostility for battling. CW isn't about that shit.

[Master Chief]

I'm better than both of you so it doesn't matter.



On a serious note: Cosh, making a topic like this makes you seem very insecure and desperate. It's almost crying, lol. Just my unbiased observation...


Honestly, unless you're battling or something, there shouldn't be any, "I'm better than you. fuck you, your writing is terrible." Again, for the second time today, I'm going to sound like a peace-loving hippie but, you guys should be helping each other grow as writers. Of course, that doesn't mean you say something is good when it isn't.. But just saying "Fuck off, you suck." doesn't help anyone.

I've gone out of my way to help a lot of writers here (and other sites) with either feedback or personal, one-on-one advice. I could have easily clowned them and forgotten it but that doesn't help hip hop at all. And yeah, writing is a part of hip hop. It eventually (for most people) leads to creating songs and spreading the message.


Save the hostility for battling. CW isn't about that shit.

Honestly, this dude doesn't deserve help from anyone. He acts like he's the shit everywhere. Check his posts. He started writing like a few months ago yet he seems to act like he's a pro already. That really pisses me off.

Check his battle on the Rap Battle section. Bitching and moaning in his battle with C.R.E.A.M & Geno til the end.


And personally, I HATE saying "LOL, I'm better than you rofl lololo" but when someone makes a thread JUST to say he's better than you, then I just can't hold it in.

[Satire]

Ummmmmmm

You lose just for making this thread

Exactly

This pretty much. I'm cool with both of you but this thread made you look like you were crying for self assurance, bro.

[Sam.]

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[WakeUpShow]

@MCSam, how is it the end of the thread because you ignored me? lol

@Block, Satire, and Class- I know it makes me sound desperate. And it wasnt for self-assurance, I just needed to know if he was the only ignorant one on here. I am very confident (not sub-concious lololol) in my writing. I just needed someone else to point out that him copying Eminem in a real shitty way is not better than concepts that I wrote with a meaning and different levels of metaphor/symbolism. He think just because he's been writing for a year makes him better than me. And @ Chief, stop trying to convince people I am cocky. Check my other posts, I only get cocky if ignorant little assholes like you set me off. I am a better writer than you, by a lot, and I don't need to convince myself of that, I need others to drive the point home. I'm not getting help, because I went about it the wrong way. But rest assured, if I had went about it the right way, the overwhelming majority would agree that I am the better writer. And I don't like to tear others down, but you set me off and you really needed to be tore down.

[WakeUpShow]

just battle this bitch out then

i offered I'm pretty sure he denyed but we'll see.

[Devil'sAdvocate]

battle him

[classthe_king]

Cosh you're way too cocky. Neither of you are good writers tbh, yes cosh you have stories and symbolism and metaphors but most of them are boring and pointless and poorly executed. I haven't reach or seen much from mc, but if he is 2sday/x'd up/chronic jon/makavelithadon then yes, he is a better writer than you. I'm still not sure about that though.