Poorly written lines

[SoldierShady]

"So I can sit next to Carson Dailey and FRED DURST and hear em argue over who she gave head to first"


SHOULD HAVE BEEN...

"So I can sit to Carson Dailey and FRED DURST and hear em argue to whom she gave HEAD FIRST"

[Hiphopdane]

"Feed it beans it is gassed up" - Not afraid
"How do you douche bag feel knowing you're disposable" - Won't back down
"I guess that's why they call it window pane" - Love the way you lie

[MikeNUFC]

You ruined it now, I hope you can't sleep and you dream about it.
And when you dream, I hope you can't sleep and you scream about it.

Awful, that. Em even changed it in the live version with Elton, so he must have realised.

What did he change it to

I hope you go to sleep and you dream about it

[tross840]

hahha i always thought the stan line was due to Stan being so pissed and drunk out of his mind that he couldnt think straight. I thought that was what em was trying to portray.

Also with regards to a bad line how about this

cuz i aint playing around
its a game called circle and i dont know how

[MackBook]

"Feed it beans it is gassed up" - Not afraid
"How do you douche bag feel knowing you're disposable" - Won't back down
"I guess that's why they call it window pane" - Love the way you lie

The window pain line is sick

[Ice_Scarred]

"Fuck the world, feed it beans, its gassed up if it thinks its stoppin me"

OMG I wanted to punch the wall when I first heard that.

And than we have "the urge pull to pull my dick from the dirt and fuck the whole universe".

Come on dawg. Wtf? Not Afraid was a good song but it sounded like he was so desperate to force out punchlines that it came out corny.

[shadyboymez]

I almost made a song dissin' Lil Wayne
It's like I was jealous of him cause of the attention he was gettin'
I felt horrible about myself
He was spittin and I wasn't
Anyone who was buzzin back then coulda got it
Almost went at Kanye too

i just can't stand the way that sounds

[Hiphopdane]

hahha i always thought the stan line was due to Stan being so pissed and drunk out of his mind that he couldnt think straight. I thought that was what em was trying to portray.

Me too. Don't think anyone could write something that messed up if it wasn't on purpose.

Never really understood that "there's a game called circle" line. What?

[GenePeer]

hahha i always thought the stan line was due to Stan being so pissed and drunk out of his mind that he couldnt think straight. I thought that was what em was trying to portray.

Me too. Don't think anyone could write something that messed up if it wasn't on purpose.

Never really understood that "there's a game called circle" line. What?

there's a game called CIRCLE and he doesn't know how to play it...so he's not playing aROUND!! get it?

[Emadyville]

You ruined it now, I hope you can't sleep and you dream about it.
And when you dream, I hope you can't sleep and you scream about it.

Awful, that. Em even changed it in the live version with Elton, so he must have realised.

holy fuck i never realized that before


I have to myself for this

[Robot]

There might be several 'poorly written lines'..But it fits with the song, if he would have written it a different way. It would have probably turned out whack.

[EminemInsider]

Can pretty much just name poorly written SONGS.

Not Afraid and Won't Back Down...of course, those are the two songs that are EVERYWHERE. Go figure.

Talkin' 2 Myself has mostly shitty lyrics...which is unfortune because musically, it's dope...and the content is interesting.