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Ending lines in the middle of the sentence..

Postby 1TS OK4Y » Dec 30th, '10, 01:04

When did Em start doing this so much? I hate it. It sounds really shitty if you ask me.

Actually, I think he's always done it, but he more or less pauses now so it really makes it feel awkward I feel. He needs better rhyming structure or just don't make it so obvious..

Anyone else bothered by this?
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Re: Ending lines in the middle of the sentence..

Postby iraqi4life » Dec 30th, '10, 01:08

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Re: Ending lines in the middle of the sentence..

Postby Static » Dec 30th, '10, 01:08

I've noticed that too. I think it sounds cool TBH. :8)
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Re: Ending lines in the middle of the sentence..

Postby 1TS OK4Y » Dec 30th, '10, 01:08

Amadeo wrote:Yeah. I'm really bothered by it.

He does it all through Cocaine. It's just a mess.


I think that's honestly his biggest problem..I'm not sure why he started doing this (or again - just pausing longer)
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Postby cocaine2011 » Dec 30th, '10, 01:11

Writers Block FYI.

Em', lost his memory, :zipped:

Recovery was really good though
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Postby Sebizzle » Dec 30th, '10, 01:15

it sounds good on Cocaine, but it does sound cheap/ cheesy on some songs
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Re: Ending lines in the middle of the sentence..

Postby slimshady13 » Dec 30th, '10, 01:19

The only time I liked it was during the Westwood freestyle's before the release of Relapse.
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Re: Ending lines in the middle of the sentence..

Postby slimsoxshady » Dec 30th, '10, 01:21

i kinda like it
makes the rhymes less predictable
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Postby Mahmoud48 » Dec 30th, '10, 01:26

slimsoxshady wrote:i kinda like it
makes the rhymes less predictable

agreed
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Postby NicoleEM » Dec 30th, '10, 01:29

Hmmm i don't really mind it :happy:
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Re: Ending lines in the middle of the sentence..

Postby xxTrigger1989xx » Dec 30th, '10, 01:40

If properly executed, it's fine
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Re: Ending lines in the middle of the sentence..

Postby Cam_24 » Dec 30th, '10, 01:42

It's never really bothered me to be honest.
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Re: Ending lines in the middle of the sentence..

Postby EminemBase » Dec 30th, '10, 01:42

Shitty? No way, it's a skill not a flaw.

Or maybe we're talking about something else, I think you're referring to his recent choppy flows like on "Where I'm At" where it sounds like the sentences have been chopped up.

That's more to do with his flows, in his constant struggle to sound different every album.

But, something he and other good rappers do but which he does very well (as a skill) is ending... well, ending lines in the middle of words or even half way through a sentence, but the flow remains smooth - this makes you have to keep listening to make sense of the complete line, it's technique and it's skillful. It's like... rhythmic flair or something.

But I don't think you necessarily mean that anyway. To see what I'm talking about you can listen to the 09 Westwood freestyle, he does it a lot there, sounds awesome.
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Re: Ending lines in the middle of the sentence..

Postby TheGentlePlayer » Dec 30th, '10, 02:06

:facepalm
I wanted an album so rugged nobody could touch it.
Spent a million a track and went over my budget.
Now how in the fuck am I supposed to get out of debt?
I can't rap anymore, I just murdered the alphabet.
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Re: Ending lines in the middle of the sentence..

Postby HereHere » Dec 30th, '10, 02:06

gr8 thred bruh

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