by jojod88 » Aug 27th, '13, 07:12
OMEGA wrote:jojod88 wrote:Hook is GOAT
Beat is pretty good
Lyrics are meh
Flow is horrible
Delivery is horrible
The screaming is horrible
Overall average song, but a horrible single. Although this will be a big hit no doubt based on Em's name and the hook/beat.
What screaming?
Delivery and flow range from good to really great.
Yeah you're right the screaming isn't as bad as before. Its more of an aggressive delivery. I like the energy but It's just that choppy flow (especially in the 2nd verse) and the weird change ups that drive me crazy. Overall I wasn't impressed with the delivery and I thought it was all over the place. All I want is that smooth, somewhat monotone voice with that classic slim flow. I can hardy understand what he's saying anymore.

"Shorrttyyy I lovve youuuuuu and youuuu loovve meeee toooo,
We were meantt to bee cuzz shorttyy youuu lovee meeeee,
and I lovvveee youuuu tooooo, and I promise I'll bee truee tooo youu..."