Our House ft. Eminem

[Accor]

Wait, do you say it like "Juan"?

No, it's like "wun" or whatever. I'm pronouncing them both correctly and they sound nothing alike lol.

[Accor]

Where? EAST?! QUEBEC!??!

HELLLLLL no.

Yes you are.

That's why Em's verse seems lazy, you can't tell what rhymes.

I'm not from Quebec nuhhguh. I've been once, did not enjoy myself.

Wait, do you say it like "Juan"?

No, it's like "wun" or whatever. I'm pronouncing them both correctly and they sound nothing alike lol.

But he doesn't pronounce it "properly", so it benefits the rhyming lol.

Oh lmao, I haven't listened to it enough to know how he pronounced "just". I'm just going by the lyrics on paper. "Just" and "One" don't sound alike enough to count as a rhyme when saying them correctly.

[Accor]

Warning=infraction? Or is it like a one warning then ban type deal.

[momentsgolden]

Also, Accor...



You're wrong lol.

say something to that! lol
/rhyme argument WON

[Accor]

I still agree with Blu lol. I can see how it nearly rhymes if you really put emphasis on the "uh" but whatever. We can move on now lol.

Also yeah thanks Menzo, that's basically what an infraction is.

[Accor]

naw.. pretty sure im rite loob boi

[GibbsyB]

"Looking back on, my career even, hindsights, tunnel vision, 5 mics
Never wanted that so bad well I got-ta go mad
Nomad with a notepad
Go Taz, spaz on these ho bags
That bother me, but I never wanna show that
Just don't act like it ever does
Even though you know that there will never come"
A day someone blows past you, never was
Someone who's as dope as you ever was
And you hope that's, true cause the competitor in you
Couldn't let someone be better than you
And you know that, so you don't ever hold back
What you gonna go back, to working a regular job?
Fuck that, I'm gonna go hard grab on my, gonads
Tell them fuck theyselves
They call me a wigger like Renee Zell
But I raised hell like a stay-at-home dad
Rap is the only thing that I was ever really, bad to the bone at
Guess I'm similar to, gangrene when I'm, angry then I'm
Hulk Smash, so much passion but no compassion
If eyes are the windows to the soul
Then it's, broken glass and there's no trespassing
Alright now here we go
Dre stamped me now I'm stamping Yelawolf
Be ready for the most competitive
Clique in the world it's like Clash Of The Titans
I released the cracker it's time to set it again
And when it's said and it's all done
None shall ever fuck with this squadron
So come on in, at your own risk
This is (Our House) Bitch!

i think hes trying to say
looking back on his carrer in hindsite its hard for him to
focus, (maybe cuza the drugs, everything was a blur for him?)
all he ever wanted back then was 5 mics (im sure he means in the source magazine)
so he would always go mad whenever he was spitting "go mad
these hobags"...< (definalty rhyme for the sake of it coz critics wud of been better
terminology) never botherd him even tho they did and even tho no1
will every achieve what he has again (maybe) hes explaining all this in 3rd person
and hes saying that he never wanted anyone to be better so he wouldnt
let up or "hold back".. then starts questioning himself in that frame of mind
like "what you wanna go back to wokring an normal job"
"fuck that"- then repeats himself in a compellty unneccersery but still ON TOPIC
way and says nah imma go hard grab my gonads lol,
tell them all they can fuck themselves, hense the reason people
start callin him a wigger (rocking that hiphop culture attitude)
allthough he cuda just say that steada
the renee zellwigger reference...
the stay at home dad line (fuck knows tbh)
then goes on STILL ON TOPIC TO EXPLAIN hes like this cuz rap
is all hes good at , so he has to go at it an be
BAD (gangreen) = Hulk smash (this lines i fink is pretty dope)
saying how hes got this passion but no compassion for anyone else
shit i could go on til the end but you get what im saying....

it isnt delivered well NO, he isnt using the smoothest of flows
his delivery is all over the place, i dont really like his verse on this
but i will argue that it does actaully make sense and stays on topic thruout,
read between the lines, thats what raps about whether its good or not lol

[Kill You]

naw.. pretty sure im rite loob boi

No one wants to see that faggot, take that shit elsewhere please.

And no, you're wrong. Get over it. Don't act like you've never been wrong before, "loob boi" (fuckin stupid).

[Blu]

I don't see why you guys are so mad... making it escalate to an unnecessary argument about how "just" and "one" doesn't rhyme.

[eminembound]

Yeah, it was well-written but that delivery wasn't good, according to me.

This.

I agree Em's verse was nice (lyrically) and I liked his voice. But I didn't enjoy his flow and everything.

The delivery was ......

[Squiggles123]

Wow haha I commented on this yesterday and I think there is 6 pages of posts since then?

Some long ass argument about whether lyrics rhymed and whether it made sense? It makes sense and who really cares if it actually rhymes as long as it flows well and the way its pronounced works and makes it appear to rhyme.

[_Hawk_]

You pronounce it like ON?! LOL

/argument

What a stupid post

One rhymes better with on than it does with just.

I'm on one flows so much bettter than I'm just one

/argument

Seriously, I can understand the whole argument about whether the verse is lazy, but you can't deny that the verse is a ramble. He jumps around with a choppy flow. The rhyming is fairly solid, but from a lyricist like Em this is to be expected. The way he has written the verse is seemingly quite lazy. It's not a coherent structure. It's a mix of fairly random lines which are pushed together to create an idea of his ambitions in the rap game, and his views on what has happened to him; which, incidentally, are pretty empty. It's no Marshall Mathers, that's for sure!

I'd like to suggest that the depth of his verse is just the tip of the iceberg, but this is probably one of those ice-cubes you find in the back of your fridge.

So is it lazy? In terms of the mixture of delivery and his ability to produce a well structured verse that shows a coherent thought process, YES.

[Berry]

So much passion with no compassion. If eyes are the window to the soul, there'd be broken glass and no tresspassing

The song sounds so much better with the official copy.

I actually rate Em on par with crooked on this track. Joell ahead simply because of the content of his verse. Royce at the back.

[Accor]

You pronounce it like ON?! LOL

/argument

What a stupid post

One rhymes better with on than it does with just.

I'm on one flows so much bettter than I'm just one

/argument

Seriously, I can understand the whole argument about whether the verse is lazy, but you can't deny that the verse is a ramble. He jumps around with a choppy flow. The rhyming is fairly solid, but from a lyricist like Em this is to be expected. The way he has written the verse is seemingly quite lazy. It's not a coherent structure. It's a mix of fairly random lines which are pushed together to create an idea of his ambitions in the rap game, and his views on what has happened to him; which, incidentally, are pretty empty. It's no Marshall Mathers, that's for sure!

I'd like to suggest that the depth of his verse is just the tip of the iceberg, but this is probably one of those ice-cubes you find in the back of your fridge.

So is it lazy? In terms of the mixture of delivery and his ability to produce a well structured verse that shows a coherent thought process, YES.

THIS, lol.

naw.. pretty sure im rite loob boi

No one wants to see that faggot, take that shit elsewhere please.

And no, you're wrong. Get over it. Don't act like you've never been wrong before, "loob boi" (fuckin stupid).

^^^^^ and I was impersonating another poster here, loob

[tadpole25]

solid verse. i like eminem's flow when he changes his voice tone throughout , rather than screaming in monotone or rapping in a chinese accent.