I don't get this

[VenomBlackViper]

[Elision]

so many facepalms in this thread Jesus Christ ....

Jesus Christ needs his wife to feed a dyke some peach and rice before she leaves tonight, man he's the sweetest type all he eats is lice, cheese and mice..

[EmGoGetEm]

Also this would've worked better imo

It's only fair to warn I was born with a pair of horns
And metaphors comin outta my bedsores

umbilical cord didn't really fit that rhyme scheme anyways
as for that other thread I would post in there but this is already here so fuck it.

@everyone else keep facepalming, here i'll do it with you

Because it's not as simple as making words rhyme, the substance of the word and the metaphor actually matters. Saying you had metaphors attached to your umbilical cord at birth is way sicker than saying bedsores.

[buffalo bill]

[VenomBlackViper]

Also this would've worked better imo

It's only fair to warn I was born with a pair of horns
And metaphors comin outta my bedsores

umbilical cord didn't really fit that rhyme scheme anyways
as for that other thread I would post in there but this is already here so fuck it.

@everyone else keep facepalming, here i'll do it with you

Because it's not as simple as making words rhyme, the substance of the word and the metaphor actually matters. Saying you had metaphors attached to your umbilical cord at birth is way sicker than saying bedsores.

[EmGoGetEm]

Also this would've worked better imo

It's only fair to warn I was born with a pair of horns
And metaphors comin outta my bedsores

umbilical cord didn't really fit that rhyme scheme anyways
as for that other thread I would post in there but this is already here so fuck it.

@everyone else keep facepalming, here i'll do it with you

Because it's not as simple as making words rhyme, the substance of the word and the metaphor actually matters. Saying you had metaphors attached to your umbilical cord at birth is way sicker than saying bedsores.

[Wreck]

Not everyone thinks of all the words/multies that would rhyme, it mostly just comes to them when they play it in their head.

[RainMan44]

I'm so fucking baked right now.

[VenomBlackViper]

[Mxracer6y]

But its such a simple multi to think of, how did he not think pair of horns would rhyme better than set of horns when he wrote that. It's so obvious it's almost like he originally made it pair of horns and then changed it for some reason.

...because he rhymes "set of horns" with "metaphors" in the next line.

lol...

[Mxracer6y]

Also this would've worked better imo

It's only fair to warn I was born with a pair of horns
And metaphors comin outta my bedsores

umbilical cord didn't really fit that rhyme scheme anyways
as for that other thread I would post in there but this is already here so fuck it.

@everyone else keep facepalming, here i'll do it with you

Welp.. was hopin it wouldn't come to this but...


After that post, it's inevitable .....



Were you serious with what you just suggested ?

Why the hell would you sacrifice "set of horns/metaphors" JUST so you could rhyme "fair to warn/pair of horns'"?? and then turn around and rhyme metaphor with bedsores??? WTF? I mean why even use metaphors at this point? thats so fukin random and makes ZERO sense...

P.S. Do i really need to point out that 'metaphors' (and set of horns) has 3 syllables? and bedsores only has two? That was a terrible example...It doesn't sound right if you dont match syllables......

[Elision]

Nollie comin in to steal the venom's combo breaker!!

[Sam.]

swagger jacker

[BigBangBazinga]

Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy, oh whyyyyyyyyyyyy is this thread still here.

[VenomBlackViper]

Nollie comin in to steal the venom's combo breaker!!