The best thing about Beautiful (& Deja Vu)

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He's rhyming "rear seat" with "hear me" from the line before you fucking imbecile.

And here are another ten facepalms for saying rhyme scheme isn't in Deja Vu.

Are you serious? Please tell me this is your lame attempt at an awful troll.

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Essentially, what you're trying to tell me is that the only words that can rhyme are the ones that hit the snare. Better known as the 'end rhymes', correct? You're beyond help. You should be banned from listening to any form of hip hop. Period.


He's acting weird again, he's really beginning to scare me.
Wont shave his beard again and he pretends he doesn't hear me.
And all he does is eat Doritos and Cheetos,
and he just fell asleep in his car eating three musketeers in the rear seat'.

^^^^ How can you read that verse and tell me that the hard 'e' sounds aren't part of the main rhyme scheme? Because they're not perfect multies?? You're a fucking idiot.

Also, who said This song wasn't from Deja Vu? Dumb ass.

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LMAO@ you.

I meant 'who said this song wasn't deja vu, though?'. Yeah, sorry, it's 5 am. Good job acting like pretentious douche again, though. Mad you lost the last argument, huh?

Essentially, what you're trying to tell me is that the only words that can rhyme are the ones that hit the snare.

No, that's just you making shit up. I never said that.

He's acting weird again, he's really beginning to scare me.
Wont shave his beard again and he pretends he doesn't hear me.
And all he does is eat Doritos and Cheetos,
and he just fell asleep in his car eating three musketeers in the rear seat'.

^^^^ How can you read that verse and tell me that the hard 'e' sounds aren't part of the main rhyme scheme? Because they're not perfect multies?? You're a fucking idiot.

Also, who said This song wasn't from Deja Vu? Dumb ass.

The multi Eminem was going for was hear me/rear seat. Three Musketeers and rear seat is an internal monosyllabic rhyme.

What I was saying is that you're a total fucking idiot because you thought the only rhyming he was doing was with Three Musketeer and rear seat. You didn't even know he was rhyming "rear seat" with "hear me," then you have the audacity to claim Deja Vu has easy rhyming and that rhyme scheme isn't in it?

You aren't qualified to judge Eminem's rhyming because you don't even understand what he's doing.

"Who said this song wasn't from Deja Vu?" What the fuck are you even saying, you baboon? How can a song be from a song?

So my lack of mentioning 'hear me' (due to my post being made in a comedic nature, not a break down and examination of the song) automatically means I didn't know that they rhymed? Have you bothered to read my work? Again, you look like a dumb ass.

How are you going to say I'm 'not qualified to judge eminem's work' when I'm probably the most talented writer on this forum? Ask anyone in the real community.. They'll tell you.

Nice job trying to divert attention away from the fact you fucked up, though. I clearly stated that song was, in fact, deja vu. You look like a total failure right now.





Oh.. And I'm infinity better than you and anyone you associate with when it comes to writing and rhyme schemes. I'd rap circles around you, faggot.

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You said that Deja Vu has easy rhymes and that it has no rhyme scheme. You're completely clueless.

You couldn't write a song as good as Deja Vu if your life depended on it.

You need another reading comprehension class, don't you?

I was more making fun of the ease of the rhymes. I was also posting in an ironic manner because of the fact that rhyme scheme isn't in that song.

Tell me where I said that song has no rhyme schemes. Go on, do it. Go on, now..

Ease of rhymes? Hell yeah. His rhyming is sub par in comparison to other rappers I listen to.


I notice you didn't try to defend yourself or form any kind of rebuttal for the fact I'm the better than anyone you know.


Just admit defeat. You're a punching bag.

[NicoleEM]

Best thing about Beautiful..it's the song itself.I know it doesn't fit Relapse's concept,but i still don't get the hate for it.I love the song.

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Really? Is that all thou have?

yes, that rhyming is easy. I rhyme like that in a lot of songs... Lol.

The fact you find it top notch and difficult only exemplifies my excellence.

Also, with the title being "the best thing about beautiful", and me having mentioned only one rhyme pattern, I figured you could put two and two together on your own.. I seeeeeee now that I gave you way too much credit. Next time we'll take baby steps and start with the crayons first. What's your favorite color?


Don't kid yourself. it's not that my remark "didn't dignify a response." It's that it was completely accurate. (and 100% relevant). having seen your remark that I was "unqualified" ( ), I decided to remind you that I'm better than you'll ever be.

You'd be better off shoving your dick into a meat grinder than arguing with me over rhymes.

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And LMAO @you missing half of the rhymes while trying to tell me I'm the unqualified one. Fuck outta here.

[VenomBlackViper]

>Joke thread turns into serious debate
>Master Chief evil plan works perfectly

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And LMAO @you missing half of the rhymes while trying to tell me I'm the unqualified one. Fuck outta here.

I didn't miss half. I deliberately left out eat/(a)sleep and pointing out (a)gain with (pre)tend would've made it messy. Where are the rhymes I missed, genius?

Oh, and please post some more of the easy rhymes in Deja Vu. I implore you.

And yes, you are unqualified to judge Eminem's rhyming because you can't even identify his multis.

It's absolutely hilarious that you think you can write a better song than Deja Vu. You're no way near that level.

I already pointed this out in one of my first posts toward you: any word with a hard 'e' sound. Meaning eating, etc. you do know what a hard 'e' sound is, right? Is it crayon time again?


And lmaoooooooo @ ME not knowing multies... Anyone who reads this, and knows me, will laugh at you for being the most pathetic try-hard since macfaggot.

My level of writing dwarfs your comprehension of the English language, tenfold.


Now you're spouting shit out of your keyboard merely to keep afloat in this little debacle.

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Wait, wait.. HE MADE A TYPO! You show how truly pathetic you are by attempting to mock typos.

I've already destroyed you. Literary terms, themselves, have little to do with being able to apply them.

You attempt to make the arguments about spelling mistakes and so-on as a way to distract from how badly you get slaughtered at the original topics. I find it quite amusing, honestly.

at any rate, you're really bad at this. Pointing out typos and literary terms doesn't take away from the fact I made you suck my metaphorical dick multiple times in one sitting (in just this thread alone).


But ehh, it's 6 30am. I'm lucky I can even type on this phone.


Maybe when you can write something half as decent as me we can talk about rhyme schemes again. Until that day, you can continue to stan it up.



Btw for someone who holds their knowledge of language in such high esteem, you truly are a horrific writer.

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LOL @ that pathetic surrender. Translation: you completely SCHOOLED me in English. I have NO response.

Please point out some of my horrific writing and why it's horrific.

I don't think I'm very good (no way near Eminem's level), but I'm not horrific. But you're the self-proclaimed best writer on this forum, and you can "easily" write something like Deja Vu.

Going to bed = "surrender"? Nah, it's called health. See, unlike you and insider, I don't take internet banter to heart. my life isn't at a low enough point where I use arguing to prove my superiority. I do it because it annoys kids like you who take it to heart. That's why I win: no matter what you say, or think you've proven, you're still wrong.

As I said above, I'm on my phone. I'm not going to look up your writing. Judging solely on your text drop for the tournament, your writing is basic and simple without much imagery at all.

So yeah, maybe next time we have fun like this, you can try to stay on the topic instead of diverting quentin away from the fact I annihilated you on the topic. Debating a topic isn't about grammatical errors. That's merely your failsafe for when you're losing (which seems to be alot these days).


Get good. I'm getting sleep.

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Hope you never wake up you brainless, miserable excuse for a human being.

I'm quoting this to prove how angry I made you.

See? I stay in the winner's circle. Where are you, amadeo? Not in the circle! You are sjunned from the circle until you stop acting like a bitch. Leper.


Block: 2
amadeo: 0

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Oh.. You missed the 'I' in the beginning of your sentence.

Okay, good night. Going to sleep in my winner's circle

[classthe_king]

Deja Vu sucks.

[Satire]

Deja Vu sucks.

Jared, is there any song on Recovery or Relapse that you actually liked?