Amadeo wrote:Royce was completely unremarkable on Fast Lane.
First verse:
I might rap tight as the snatch of a fat dyke
Though I ain’t wrapped tight
My blood type’s the ’80s!
My ’90s was like the Navy, you was like the Bradys
You still fly kites daily!
Flow's all over the place. Boring wordplay. And an awkward transition into Eminem's verse.
Second verse: much better. Some decent rhyming/flow. Then he speeds up. BLEGH.
Third verse: Crappy fast rap where his flow falls apart.
Oh hell no. Royce's first verse is good. Great rhyming like (cigar)ette witcha asshole/deaded the past so/(resurr)ected my cash flow. The flow on those lines is weird yeah but honestly the rest of his first verse is smooth and great.
Now... his second verse is excellent. His fast flow is lightyears better than Eminem's so don't even imply that it sucks. When he speeds up, it's perfect. He enunciates every single word clearly while flowing his ass off while rhyming like crazy while using heavy alliteration. That part is beyond insane.
Uhmmm. It's pretty obvious you hate fast rap so maybe it's your opinion. But, the third verse is what culminated Eminem's slaughter. This verse's flow is perfect. The rhyming is leagues ahead of Eminem's. Seriously, the third verse is crap because you hate fast rap and because he speeds up in parts (in your words, "falls aparts")? What about his delivery, his rhyming, his lines? Is that not taken into consideration?