viper50 wrote:slimsoxshady wrote:sounds like you should focus your rhymes on non-Eminem related material from now on
pretty sure you've posted this on every one of my threads.
1. i did not write any of this
2. i'm not claiming it's real, i'm just trying to get others' input, i'm just as skeptical as you
As for poor rhymes, i think it would all be in how he delivered it. I loved how "first of all i'm a boss, i just want to get that across, even my dentist hates when i floss" sounded and those are kindergarten rhymes. i thought "virginities lost/Slim Shady’s songs/dick in his bong" was a sick rhyme scheme, especially with Eminem's delivery. I also think the tipper/zipper/kiss her lines could all be dope or wack depending on how they are delivered. we'll just have to wait and see.
These lyrics are the epitome of horrible.
