ChristinaE12 wrote:MikeNUFC wrote:Everyone missing my point.
I'm not saying multies are the only thing that make a good verse/song.
Not at all. Storytelling, imagery, good use of vocabulary, humour, internal rhyming, flow, delivery, concepts, interesting wordplay and multies are all part of it. Of course, I dont expect all of this in every verse but this song lacks pretty much all of these aspects.
Saddened that this has leaked. Eminem reminded of when he was in his darkest place.
Incredible that he managed to come out of the slump. He sounds like he's about to drop over dead on this.
Not to take away from what you are saying at all, cause really no one is wrong here.. (Note the bold) But I think this is the very reason many like this song. Cause of that fact alone. Cause it shows just how human Eminem is. How fucked up he was at one point in his life and now he's back on top the world again. It's unbelievable and awesome. I think that is pretty much the sole reason people like this track and rate it highly. I know it's why I do.
Yeah.. it does suck that it got leaked. I dont think many are saying otherwise. But we have it regardless now.
I dont get why people would enjoy a song where someone is so fucked up. There's Rock Bottom and then there's this.
But hey, to each his own.
I shouldnt have put "Eminem reminded of when he was in his darkest place.". But Eminem would not have wanted other people to hear it, which is the fucked up part.
Graphic wrote:Are you joking?
If you're referring to the hook of Syllables as "unintentional irony" then you're an idiot. It's not unintentional. The hook is done like that to represent exactly what Eminem says is idiotic in his verse.
Doesn't work though.
Eminem's stuff around that time was AWFUL. Eminem WAS a bad rapper at the time - a bad lyricist so for him to be criticising rappers for being poor lyricists is hypocritical. He didnt realize he was so bad, that's why it's unintentional.
Listen to T2M - he basically admits this.
I understand the concept of the song. I get the chorus.
Stop trying make Eminem out to be some kind of superhuman. Even he'll admit he was a terrible rapper around this time.
BawlTikki wrote:Yes because Eminem has always been known for his good use of vocabulary right...?
Er, yes, unless you're an idiot. Just because he doesnt overcomplicate his work like Immortal Technique or Canibus doesnt mean he doesnt have a good use of vocab. His use of vocab is superb - he doesnt overcomplicate when he doesnt need to. He uses everyday lanaguage while still rhyming superbly.
BawlTikki wrote:And LOL @ wanting humor on a track that is supposed to be a tribute to his best friend....
I dont want humour - I was just using that as a general point.