Tech N9ne Reacts To Chart Success, Talks Eminem

[Devil'sAdvocate]

Lello hates LTWYL,tbh lello hates new Em because he wants to feel special.

whoop tee doo!

[Devil'sAdvocate]

no I don't

I hate new em cause I hate his lyrics and his delivery. suck a phat one

no,did you give mike a rub and tug last night?

did you ponder class too?

aww poor baby lello will never grow up!

[momentsgolden]

Erm.....

I feel bad you typed that all up as tbh that has nothing to do with what i said or ment. Maybe you got it twisted a bit lol.

Just read your post again, got it twisted lol So, yeah, gotta agree... there is a higher chance he can be bettered now its just that sometimes there doesnt seem to be balance in the way people evaluate him its frustrating lol

Either you haven't fully understood what I meant by lazy rhyming or I haven't explained it clearly enough. The example you used with If I Had was totally irrelevant. Those words weren't meant to be rhymed with each other. He used to to set up a bar and then had a multi at the end. Where as on Beautiful, those were obviously being rhymed with each other.

Cool then, lets use another example

Eminem Wrote:
I love you Slim, we coulda been together, think about it
You ruined it now, I hope you can't sleep and you dream about it
And when you dream I hope you can't sleep and you SCREAM about it

or I love pissin' you off, it get's me off,
like my lawyer's, when the fuckin' judge let's me off,
all you motherfuckers gotta do is set me off,

Windows tinted on my ride when I drive in it
So when I rob a bank, run out and just dive in it
So I'll be disguised in it
And if anybody identifies the guy in it


Like Class pointed out, the rhymes were rhyming different words BEFORE the end words and they are sorta subtle, even the way they are delivered in the song. With particular emphasis on physched and right back.

Like i said, its not great but its not evidence of bad writing as well.

[Innovation]

Like i said, its not great but its not evidence of bad writing as well.

You're right, I didn't really think much about it. However, Beautiful as a whole isn't a well written song. I'll still stand by that but the example I used wasn't the best. That's for sure!

But yeah dude - you're totally right about it not indicating bad lyricism. Props for the clarification on what you meant.

[slimsoxshady]

Vintage Em scared of getting outshined.

lmao Eminem would get absolutely slaughtered