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Re: New Eminem All She Wrote Verse !!

Postby xxTrigger1989xx » Nov 18th, '10, 04:32

classthe_king wrote:
Gorila wrote:
classthe_king wrote::facepalm @ Bipolar line
Your kinda becoming pretty predictable, but to each of his own tho :y:


That's because Eminem is becoming pretty predictable.


You gotta admit, there are some pretty good rhymes in the new verse, though...
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Re: New Eminem All She Wrote Verse !!

Postby Slim's Shady » Nov 18th, '10, 04:32

^ and punchlines.
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Re: New Eminem All She Wrote Verse !!

Postby classthe_king » Nov 18th, '10, 04:42

His rhymes were alright, pretty average. Most of it was just rhymes though, little to no wordplay and the little wordplay there was awful. I didn't see any good punches.
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Re: New Eminem All She Wrote Verse !!

Postby Slim's Shady » Nov 18th, '10, 04:44

classthe_king wrote:His rhymes were alright, pretty average. Most of it was just rhymes though, little to no wordplay and the little wordplay there was awful. I didn't see any good punches.

EminemBase wrote:"If you was bleach and I was hair I wouldn't die for ya"

Nice.
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Re: New Eminem All She Wrote Verse !!

Postby Solace » Nov 18th, '10, 04:44

I definitely think that dye for ya line is corny lol
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Re: New Eminem All She Wrote Verse !!

Postby xxTrigger1989xx » Nov 18th, '10, 04:44

@ Slim's Shady Yes, some very great punchlines too.


Well, I give up for the night. Someone PLEASE use some editing tools on the song, with T.I. and Em's new verse (including the other one, too), don't record it. You really just have to place the new verse either in place of the 1st verse or just make the song extremely long, up to you

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Re: New Eminem All She Wrote Verse !!

Postby classthe_king » Nov 18th, '10, 04:46

It makes sense but at the same time it seems forced. The hair is dyeing for the bleach?
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Re: New Eminem All She Wrote Verse !!

Postby classthe_king » Nov 18th, '10, 04:48

Miller1121 wrote:
xxTrigger1989xx wrote:@ Slim's Shady Yes, some very great punchlines too.


Well, I give up for the night. Someone PLEASE use some editing tools on the song, with T.I. and Em's new verse (including the other one, too), don't record it. You really just have to place the new verse either in place of the 1st verse or just make the song extremely long, up to you

This would make my day tomorrow if someone did this tonight

Workin on it :y:


Solace already did it
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Re: New Eminem All She Wrote Verse !!

Postby Elision » Nov 18th, '10, 04:48

This motherfucker rhymed "night summer" 23 times... :o
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Re: New Eminem All She Wrote Verse !!

Postby shadyisland » Nov 18th, '10, 04:49

Here's an edit I just threw together of all 3 Em verses and 3 of T.I.'s....


http://www.mediafire.com/?og6jma80olq05ii
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Re: New Eminem All She Wrote Verse !!

Postby classthe_king » Nov 18th, '10, 04:50

Nollie wrote:This motherfucker rhymed "night summer" 23 times... :o


That's not that impressive lol
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Re: New Eminem All She Wrote Verse !!

Postby classthe_king » Nov 18th, '10, 05:01

Copywrite and some other duded rhymed the same rhyme 87 times. :devil:
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Re: New Eminem All She Wrote Verse !!

Postby slimsoxshady » Nov 18th, '10, 05:05

already loved this song...even more now
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Re: New Eminem All She Wrote Verse !!

Postby classthe_king » Nov 18th, '10, 05:06

Actually...
He only rhymed it 15 times in 34 seconds.

Thats a three syllable rhyme almost every two seconds
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Re: New Eminem All She Wrote Verse !!

Postby RyFrizzle » Nov 18th, '10, 05:07

Is there an official one on trapmusik? If so someone please post a dl link because for some reason I cant view the site and I want the official one.
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