by Master Chief » Feb 16th, '11, 23:05
MikeNUFC wrote:Nice beat, crappy chorus.
First verse: Shot voice, the opening bit is terrible (cringing at the 'shit' wordplay) relatively boring rhyming and punchlines. Quite like the Brett Favre line, the soup/crackers bit and the back wordplay though.
Second verse: Some alright one-liners, thought bubble bit is pretty good - those type of lines are always better when they're not overcomplicated - stair/stare line is terrible. More cringy lines ("my pukes hotter than you'). Ends the verse pretty well, the hindsight punchline is actually good for Em's standards because it works both way..
LOL at people praising the stair/stare, it's horrible and so played out. And it only works one way so it's pretty redundant.
Overall, it's mehh to okay. Just what you'd expect from a Recovery throwaway really, wasn't expecting much so not dissapointed. I don't get why he continues to use expletives and vulgarity for the sake of it so much? So much random vulgarity that isn't clever or anything.
Master Chief wrote:that doesn't mean that I think Mockingbird is better than I'm Back or Just Don't Give A Fuck.
What... the... fuck? To quote yours truly:
Master Chief wrote:Damn, you got some weird taste in Eminem's music

Do you know how to read? I said that even though I prefer Eminem type songs to Slim Shady songs I
DONT think Mockingbird (Eminem type song) is better than I'm Back or JDGAF (Slim Shady type songs). Is that simple enough?

Satirical Graphitical Productions.