Our House ft. Eminem

[Accor]

WTF! He's clearly still talking about the 5 mics, critics and people who don't think he's great.

Yes, but it sounds like he's having trouble getting it out. He used to sound so natural that you wouldn't even realize he's rapping. Now it's just like ok brah get it together.

[Blu]

Yes, but it sounds like he's having trouble getting it out. He used to sound so natural that you wouldn't even realize he's rapping. Now it's just like ok brah get it together.

This.

[Man1x]

Yes, but it sounds like he's having trouble getting it out. He used to sound so natural that you wouldn't even realize he's rapping. Now it's just like ok brah get it together.

This.

Accor hit the nail on the head.

[Blu]

@Rev


There's no reason Em has to include Taz, nomads, ho bags, Rene Zellwegger into his already shitty verse. It just complicates everything and disrupts the flow of what he is trying to say. It's pretty obvious he chose those lines just for the sake of the rhyme.

[Accor]

WTF! He's clearly still talking about the 5 mics, critics and people who don't think he's great.

Yes, but it sounds like he's having trouble getting it out. He used to sound so natural that you wouldn't even realize he's rapping. Now it's just like ok brah get it together.

So...you understand what he's talking about though?

Yes, I also understand what 2 Chainz is talking about.

@Rev


There's no reason Em has to include Taz, nomads, ho bags, Rene Zellwegger into his already shitty verse. It just complicates everything and disrupts the flow of what he is trying to say. It's pretty obvious he chose those lines just for the sake of the rhyme.

I think he believes those lines are actually funny/witty I can picture him and Royce sitting there laughing hysterically at the word "gonads" and the stay at home dad line tbh

[Berry]

that's why they put my Lyrics up under this microscope, searchin' with a fine tooth comb, its like this rope, waitin'
To choke, tightening around my throat, watching me while I write this, like I don't like this,
Nope - Eminem

[Accor]

^We aren't complaining about one rhyme scheme that's a syllable off, we're saying it's bad because of bad punchlines and lazy writing throughout the verse. That doesn't apply.

[Kill You]

^We aren't complaining about one rhyme scheme that's a syllable off, we're saying it's bad because of bad punchlines and lazy writing throughout the verse. That doesn't apply.

The verse had neither bad punches or lazy writing, this post doesn't apply.

[momentsgolden]

^We aren't complaining about one rhyme scheme that's a syllable off, we're saying it's bad because of bad punchlines and lazy writing throughout the verse. That doesn't apply.

The verse had neither bad punches or lazy writing, this post doesn't apply.

This. Do people even know what the word lazy means?! Smfh.

I agree though with those that say the verse is not a CLEAR as it could/ should get. Its a great example of competition among Emcees in the booth blocking potential. He could have been infinitely clearer. The Cypher had hints of this overcomplication too.

Just saying- i fucking love the way Taz, Nomads and Gonads sound on the record.

[Broken Beats]

Love the whole cd and his voice sounds amazing as usual

[Accor]

^We aren't complaining about one rhyme scheme that's a syllable off, we're saying it's bad because of bad punchlines and lazy writing throughout the verse. That doesn't apply.

The verse had neither bad punches or lazy writing, this post doesn't apply.

The Renee Zellwegger punchline, and the stay at home dad punchline are pretty bad.

Go Taz, spaz on these ho bags
That bother me, but I never wanna show that
Just don't act like it ever does
Even though you know that there will never come
A day someone blows past you, never was
Someone who's as dope as you ever was
And you hope that's, true cause the competitor in you
Couldn't let someone be better than you
And you know that, so you don't ever hold back
What you gonna go back, to working a regular job?
Fuck that, I'm gonna go hard grab on my, gonads
Tell them fuck theyselves
They call me a wigger like Renee Zell
But I raised hell like a stay-at-home dad

Also seems like it was written by an extremely average netcee, but you're a delusional stan who won't say anything negative about present day Eminem, soo..

I'm just explaining why the verse is bad (to me), I have yet to see someone explain why it's anything above average.

[Blu]

Also seems like it was written by an extremely average netcee, but you're a delusional stan who won't say anything negative about present day Eminem, soo..

This, pretty much.

[Accor]

This song was amazing and to the people saying Eminem's metaphors are bad or he didn't have any... well!

" In our house, we spit like six owls. "

Meaning = Owls spit up the skeletons of their prey, after eating them.

He is going over some of yall heads ! Some of you need to up your vocabs !

He doesn't say that lol. He says "In our, house we spit like Sig Sauers/the way I feel now I could spit for six hours

That wouldn't be a complicated metaphor anyway :S

[Accor]

He doesn't say that lol. He says "In our, house we spit like Sig Sauers/the way I feel now I could spit for six hours

That wouldn't be a complicated metaphor anyway :S

I'm guessing you got that from RapGenius? Which has made the correction of it being "six owls". Lmao.

The Renee Zellwegger punchline, and the stay at home dad punchline are pretty bad.

Go Taz, spaz on these ho bags
That bother me, but I never wanna show that
Just don't act like it ever does
Even though you know that there will never come
A day someone blows past you, never was
Someone who's as dope as you ever was
And you hope that's, true cause the competitor in you
Couldn't let someone be better than you
And you know that, so you don't ever hold back
What you gonna go back, to working a regular job?
Fuck that, I'm gonna go hard grab on my, gonads
Tell them fuck theyselves
They call me a ***** like Renee Zell
But I raised hell like a stay-at-home dad

Also seems like it was written by an extremely average netcee, but you're a delusional stan who won't say anything negative about present day Eminem, soo..

I'm just explaining why the verse is bad (to me), I have yet to see someone explain why it's anything above average.

And what's so bad about that part? Everything on paper looks shittier.

Just listening to it. It's pretty clear imo that he says SIG, which would make more sense anyway since people say spit bullets and whatnot.

It's just lazy.. I mean, if you've ever listened to a rapper on youtube trying to be inspirational, you'd know what I'm talking about. And for someone who prides themselves on taking a huge amount of time perfecting every rhyme, it seems lazy. Also it doesn't really look worse on paper since his delivery fucks everything up lol.

[Accor]

I wouldn't say the rhyme schemes in that verse are complex lol. And rhymes aren't the only thing making it lazy. It sounds like it was written in 5 minutes.