Welcome 2 Hell (Eminem's Verses)

[Devil'sAdvocate]

Yeah, told you we'd be back.
Welcome 2 Hell

VERSE ONE - Eminem
There's a switch, I flip, emotions cut off
So cold I done froze my butt off
And this ain't even the tip of the iceberg yet
It's like squirting a squirt gun in the ocean, fuck off
Other words I didn't put a dent in a can compared to the damage I've yet to do
Long as you still have feelings to hurt, I'll be around as long as you let me get to you
Long as I got two balls to palm, I'll be the bomb, you're just a false alarm
Get scared little pissants, and see if I don't come along and stomp your farm
Thunder and lightning, rain, hail, sleet with a tornado's the kind of brainstorm I get
So when the wind starts blowing, shit, talking about goin' in?
Goin' insane's more like it!
Whiz it upwards, when he spits hazardous with it like a disastrous blizzard
So you better listen quick fast, don't miss it
Yeah, go ahead little prick, bastard, diss it
But when you get hit with a sick ass explicit flow
Don't ask how much of his passion is it that goes
Just know, that all he knows is that
It's better to kick ass than kiss it
Dick Dasterdly of audacity
Mental capacity unmatched, it has to be stopped
But it can't be, but man I can't just keep doing them like that
Or no one will rap with me
Step one, you asked who is it?

VERSE THREE - Eminem's parts
(Eminem)
Sip piss and bleed, this is a different breed of emcees, I swear
Better be aware, there's too much at stake, and to find someone this raw on a beat is rare
You can kiss my ass and the shit stains on my underwear that I don't even wear
(Eminem)
Back to badge her skull again, push a bitch out the Aston until I get the fuck outta dodge
Shouldn't have to explain my metaphors, you hasbeen's are duller than color books that ain't colored in
Second and third, fourth wind, gotta another win
Here they come again, none other than, Bad and Evil
Also known as Sadam and Osama Bin
It's been a long time, but I bet neither one of us have felt sicker as we do right now
And we only get iller with time, me and Nickel fucking shit up on the dime
Tellin' us to pipe down, it's like talking to a meth head
Bruce Willis on his death bed, last breath with an infection
Fightin' it while he's watching internet porn, about to meet his death with an erection
My god, what I mean is, David Carrideine jacking his penis in front of his tripod
Choking his own neck, what part you don't get?
I'm saying I die hard!
(Eminem + Royce)
Got your mother suckin' my balls while we fuck each other, punch each other in the eyeballs
And I never say I'm sor...ry, the 5'9 and the Fire Marshall
We spit with an intensity to shut shit down in the industry
Two different entities, with a propensity to put these N-U-T-S
Up inside your FUCKING MOUTH

Haha.
Welcome to the CD.

yes i know i may done it wrong or a lil confusing but yall get the idea,great great rhyming on this track tbh
fixed to what it sounded like to me

[EminemBase]

His problem is that he uses many near-rhymes.
He can sure pull a verse full of multis but like Lello said, it's not enough...
I like the song, tho...He's definitely getting better which is a good thing.

I wouldn't say that's a 'problem'. In fact when he first came out that was one of the things he was hailed for, for rhyming things in abundance that 'shouldn't rhyme' or near-rhyme and making it sound natural and almost perfect with his annunciation.

And he does it intentionally and always has.

He's just not as good at it now, but I don't see how it's a bad thing to do. I think the more things that rhyme or near-rhyme the better. It should be free-flowing and constant, just as long as it sounds natural and what you're saying isn't contrived or forced. But I think it's pretty dull to just rhyme things that PERFECTLY rhyme anyway.

[skeptic]

These are by far Eminem's best verses on the whole EP. Royce goes pretty hard too, a great song to start the album with.

[Devil'sAdvocate]

I notice Em has fewer Inner multies, most of them at the end of the bars, and some of them multies you highlighted don't fully rhyme. The multies are impressive though, but that's not enough to make a song great, his lyrics (word chosen - vocabulary - content) doesn't impress me too much in this song it's just decent, and his delivery is still kinda bad but it's getting better it's not too bad.

I overrated the song when I first heard the album I remember, but now after some time have passed and all the hype ran out of my ass, I can say it's a good song-very good at best, not great.

do you even fucking know what you are talkin about?

[CokeandAcid]

My favourite track on the EP

[M-Pyre]

you missed allot of fucking rhymes dude

[slimsoxshady]

brainstorm i get...sane more like it

[Berry]

Fantastic entry track.

I notice Em has fewer Inner multies, most of them at the end of the bars, and some of them multies you highlighted don't fully rhyme. The multies are impressive though, but that's not enough to make a song great, his lyrics (word chosen - vocabulary - content) doesn't impress me too much in this song it's just decent, and his delivery is still kinda bad but it's getting better it's not too bad.

Lello is a rap professor.

He know's all about cadence & delivery, considering all that Tupac he listens to.

[Berry]

Lello is a rap professor.

He know's all about cadence & delivery, considering he listens to all that Tupac.

Are you implying that Tupac is a bad rapper ? If so, then I have no respect for you

Tupac's delivery will always be the number 1 delivery in my book .. His passion appears in his music and it sounds like he's always hungry or emotional .. if you can criticize Tupac in ANY category then I don't mind but saying anything negative about Tupac's delivery (of course it's your opinion, which you didn't post it as you made it seem you were just hating) is just plain stupid.

Oh, it's the opposite my dear.

I wasn't being negative about Tupac's rapping style. I highly enjoy Pac's music.

In fact, four/three years ago I use to listen to him on a regular basis & I would say I heard about 70% of his overall catalogue. It's just that Lello & some other posters here feel they're open to bash Em's current style as if they know better.

[sully10x]

Wizard of words not wiz it upwards.

[eat_healthy]

Yeah, told you we'd be back.
Welcome 2 Hell

VERSE ONE - Eminem
There's a switch, I flip, emotions cut off
So cold I done froze my butt off

underlined some sneaky ones

[eat_healthy]

Too bad his delivery sucks so much that you don't even care enough to listen to his lyrics.

*angry glare from across the room*

[HereHere]

There's also Brainstorm I get/(in)sane's more like it.