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Re: Clever Recovery lines.

Postby Cosh » Jul 18th, '10, 02:47

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yeah it was. and it was obviously to complicated for you to get it. so yeah... clever
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Re: Clever Recovery lines.

Postby classthe_king » Jul 18th, '10, 04:57

CoSh wrote:@class
yeah it was. and it was obviously to complicated for you to get it. so yeah... clever


It wasn't too complicated for me to get at all, I thought there might be something there that I wasn't getting, but there wasn't. That line sucked just like the rest of Recovery.
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Re: Clever Recovery lines.

Postby bozothe1 » Jul 18th, '10, 10:53

classthe_king wrote:
CoSh wrote:@class
yeah it was. and it was obviously to complicated for you to get it. so yeah... clever


It wasn't too complicated for me to get at all, I thought there might be something there that I wasn't getting, but there wasn't. That line sucked just like the rest of Recovery.


Nahhhhh don't cover it up you didn't know what made the whole thing clever....... Bcuz you didn't know that Michael Vick is a prick
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Re: Clever Recovery lines.

Postby classthe_king » Jul 20th, '10, 04:33

bozothe1 wrote:
classthe_king wrote:
CoSh wrote:@class
yeah it was. and it was obviously to complicated for you to get it. so yeah... clever


It wasn't too complicated for me to get at all, I thought there might be something there that I wasn't getting, but there wasn't. That line sucked just like the rest of Recovery.


Nahhhhh don't cover it up you didn't know what made the whole thing clever....... Bcuz you didn't know that Michael Vick is a prick


I don't know what that even means :coffee: Mike Vick is the shit.


@ Amadeo, to be fair its an alright line, I just got it for the first time as I was reading in this thread so I decided to post it. I still think its smart.
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Re: Clever Recovery lines.

Postby Lilyrussell » Jul 20th, '10, 07:34

classthe_king wrote:
professor wrote:"You can get the dick, Just call me the ball sack, im nuts, Michael Vick in this bitch DOGG, fall back you MUTTS, fuck your worms, you never seen such a sick puppy"

wow


Can somebody explain why this line is good, like most of recovery it just seems blah :confusion:


WAIT guys you only quoted 1/4 of the metaphor. Yeah describing that your creul the way that Em does is pretty hard, in and of its self, but it isn't all that special. King, it's that no one writes extended, complex metaphors the way that Em does. where your able to connect either the tenor or the vehicle from line to line.

The entire metaphor is

"You can get the dick,
just call me the ball sac, I'm nuts
Michael Vick in this bitch,
dogg, fall back you mutts
Fuck your worms,
you never seen such a sick puppy
Fuck it a sick duck,
I want my duck sicked mommy"
And my nuts licked,
gobble them up trick, yummy
Bitch you don't fucking think I know that you suck dick dummy?

Get it now?
Plus switch around the first letters in "sick duck" & "duck sicked"
You get what he's going to uncover about the person he's talking about (likely Mariah) in the last line. "suck dick"
So you got layers of depth coming out the ass in there. How could you say that's not SiiiicccKKKK!
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Re: Clever Recovery lines.

Postby Lilyrussell » Jul 20th, '10, 07:51

classthe_king wrote:
I don't know what that even means :coffee: Mike Vick is the shit.


@ Amadeo, to be fair its an alright line, I just got it for the first time as I was reading in this thread so I decided to post it. I still think its smart.


Mike Vick is a creul piece of shyt, It would be the shit if he were tied to the back of my dads jag and taken for a scrape
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SO Imma fuck til I die, yeah Imma do it to death
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Elevate to new heights, step on the gas and accelerate, Imma need two mics -
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Re: Clever Recovery lines.

Postby Lilyrussell » Jul 20th, '10, 07:52

Amadeo wrote::facepalm Lily Russell...


wha? It's not a cheap simple pun though ya gotta admit... and I can't help it! ....I'm a rap nerd! I Luv it! I'm in heaven with this Album! so?? :flower:
Yeah it’s the best thing I could do right now for you Doodie is to rap
SO Imma fuck til I die, yeah Imma do it to death
And instead of mourning your death, I’d rather celebrate your life
Elevate to new heights, step on the gas and accelerate, Imma need two mics -
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Re: Clever Recovery lines.

Postby Lilyrussell » Jul 20th, '10, 08:31

But I think the most clever line in the whole album is his REAL Triple Endendre. I bet Jay-z shit when he heard it!

"You're addicted I'm dope
I'm the longest needle around here. Need a fix, ock?
I'm the big shot, get it, dick-snots?
You're just small pokes, little pricks"

“Little pricks”
1. Going with the needle theme, while Em is a big one (needles are often called shots) and makes big pricks in the skin, other guys are small needles that make tiny pricks in the skin
2. “Prick” is a derogatory name to call someone,
3. “Prick” is also slang for a penis

There is an additional play on words with “big shot” and “small pokes”. In needle terms, a big needle could be called a big shot while a small needle pokes small holes in the skin. But “big shot” is an expression meaning an important person, while “small poke” is an expression meaning an unimportant person... :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:
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SO Imma fuck til I die, yeah Imma do it to death
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Elevate to new heights, step on the gas and accelerate, Imma need two mics -
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Re: Clever Recovery lines.

Postby Lilyrussell » Jul 20th, '10, 18:13

Amadeo wrote:^ I'm glad it excites you.


It doesn't you? Em has spit the very first Triple Endendre!! :o :o

Fuck for me that alone made this Album his most genius yet! Not only that, I love Jay to death, he's in my top 5. but I was sooooo fucking sick of his dick riders trying to say Em couldn't match his depth metaphorically! Bitches can never say that shit again!
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Elevate to new heights, step on the gas and accelerate, Imma need two mics -
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Re: Clever Recovery lines.

Postby GenePeer » Jul 20th, '10, 19:23

loved the way it sounds
Imma cold soul, I ride solo so don't compare me them other bums over there. It's like apples to oranges, peaches to plums yeah i'm bananas pussy cut of your grapes and grow a pear.

surprisingly the first time i heard it, I thought it's "grow a pair (of balls)" i.e. man up, but then i read the lyrics and saw the complete fruit thing and it blew me away.

To the people who love wordplay check out this twitter account: http://twitter.com/5tevenw, some of his jokes are based on wordplay too. e.g.

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Re: Clever Recovery lines.

Postby shadyfalcon » Jul 21st, '10, 05:16

"as soon as they throw on some R KELLY i start BALLIN', MAKING IT RAIN for the ladies in the minis..."
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Re: Clever Recovery lines.

Postby slimsoxshady » Jul 21st, '10, 05:24

"call me the space shuttle destroyer, I just blew up the Challenger"
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Re: Clever Recovery lines.

Postby Lilyrussell » Jul 21st, '10, 06:14

Amadeo wrote:^ Without "dick snots," it would be okay. Nothing special.


:o :confusion: :shakehead: :o :confusion: :shakehead:

um I don't even know how to respond to that :unsure: .... Why without dick-snots? He's saying they're the runny jism left over on his dick after he shoots a load. That shit is rude, and nasty!! one of the best in the song.

But forget about it, just a second. Maybe this'll help you come a state of AWE

http://smokingsection.uproxx.com/TSS/20 ... e-entendre

"Police Don’t Have Balls & Jay-Z Still Hasn’t Spit A Triple Entendre"

"David “Mr. Masters in Journalism from Northwestern” D" gives his take on Jay-z. blah blah...

The thing about triple entendres are they don’t exist. I mean, they do in theory, but so do unicorns and pots of gold at the end of the rainbow. It’s pretty much impossible to find a phrase that will be universally understood to mean three things without a science fair poster board, preface and epilogue to visualize it all. In a quick Google search, this was the only halfway plausible example of a triple entendre & it’s still a stretch" ...

They're extremely rare almost NON EXISTENT, so they're extraordinarily difficult to come up with yet he spit one! If that ain't "special"?? :unsure: :unsure:

Why'd you think this line was clever? "I do this for them bunnies up at Denny's in the north, east and west, but when it comes to them trailers in the South Parks, muffle it, because homie, that hood's tighter than Kenny's." it seems rather simplistic...
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Elevate to new heights, step on the gas and accelerate, Imma need two mics -
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Re: Clever Recovery lines.

Postby Lilyrussell » Jul 21st, '10, 06:27

slimsoxshady wrote:"call me the space shuttle destroyer, I just blew up the Challenger"


lol i love that line. The punchline part is great too, "matter fact I need a lawyer"

he destroys his “challenger” in rap battles so badly, he’s worried about getting sued for defamation. :D
Yeah it’s the best thing I could do right now for you Doodie is to rap
SO Imma fuck til I die, yeah Imma do it to death
And instead of mourning your death, I’d rather celebrate your life
Elevate to new heights, step on the gas and accelerate, Imma need two mics -
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Re: Clever Recovery lines.

Postby Elision » Jul 21st, '10, 07:52

Lilyrussell wrote:
Amadeo wrote:^ Without "dick snots," it would be okay. Nothing special.


:o :confusion: :shakehead: :o :confusion: :shakehead:

um I don't even know how to respond to that :unsure: .... Why without dick-snots? He's saying they're the runny jism left over on his dick after he shoots a load. That shit is rude, and nasty!! one of the best in the song.

But forget about it, just a second. Maybe this'll help you come a state of AWE

http://smokingsection.uproxx.com/TSS/20 ... e-entendre

"Police Don’t Have Balls & Jay-Z Still Hasn’t Spit A Triple Entendre"

"David “Mr. Masters in Journalism from Northwestern” D" gives his take on Jay-z. blah blah...

The thing about triple entendres are they don’t exist. I mean, they do in theory, but so do unicorns and pots of gold at the end of the rainbow. It’s pretty much impossible to find a phrase that will be universally understood to mean three things without a science fair poster board, preface and epilogue to visualize it all. In a quick Google search, this was the only halfway plausible example of a triple entendre & it’s still a stretch" ...

They're extremely rare almost NON EXISTENT, so they're extraordinarily difficult to come up with yet he spit one! If that ain't "special"?? :unsure: :unsure:

Why'd you think this line was clever? "I do this for them bunnies up at Denny's in the north, east and west, but when it comes to them trailers in the South Parks, muffle it, because homie, that hood's tighter than Kenny's." it seems rather simplistic...


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