My "Going throught Changes" Remix (In Works)

[Raids-God]

Hey I wassant Sure Were to put This...... But
Ive been trying to write My Own bars For the Going Throught changes Intrumental...
Ive Wrote up a 1st Verce i just wanted you guys to take a look and see what you think...

Demons Inside, fears Love amd Pride
A Boy turning man, the Change makeing me cry.
i dont let it out i never let the fear show
I never addmited pain. pain that made me blow
i have something loced in my mouth a razzor blade
i say the wrong thing snap there goes raids. there
goes the dreams. the dreams of the fame. blood drip
in to of bars. cripled in my cage. cripled 13 thats
me my young age and here i am spitting my changes
and my rage.... my anger for improvement my anger
for the bullyin i need to get out there i need some
introducing.
Fuck the World revenge thats
a solusion. renegadeing
teen my music its the conclussion
i wanna beEminem + Nas i wanna be that fussion
i need i site of pasage..... Help me
speak to masses. help me grow quick before the
fear heats and crashes cus .... (then Hook)