open call out

[Slim Zaddy]

12 lines , 4 hit ko ,, no rules , who's down wit me

[staten island shady]

im the fucken best/
fuck the rest, i'l pass any test/
blow off any tribulation/
as u standin as im racin/
past all of your hatin/
when my mind gets to ventalation/
the words get to penatration/
im a wordsmith/
as im murderin verses, ur raps r worthless/
my raps tear at skin like a sand storm/ a
nd my 9mm makes ya fam mourn/
im ordering deaths like the son of sam's dog

[Slim Zaddy]

im the fucken best/
fuck the rest, i'l pass any test/
blow off any tribulation/
as u standin as im racin/
past all of your hatin/
when my mind gets to ventalation/
the words get to penatration/
im a wordsmith/
as im murderin verses, ur raps r worthless/
my raps tear at skin like a sand storm/ a
nd my 9mm makes ya fam mourn/
im ordering deaths like the son of sam's dog

man no offense ,, but this shit is wack , you're new ,, do some practrice ,,

[staten island shady]

alright ur turn man

[staten island shady]

no1 on the island got swaga like we do
i never fucked up so i never need a redo
do everything with ease, so everythings a breeze through
and yea, all these bitches r lovin my persona
i never sweat the small shit so fuck the under aurmor
fuck a bitch and leave her, who cares about the karma
shes suckin on my dick, she do it cause she wanna
she calls me mr. president, mr white obama
all my bitches swallo, they aint spittin like a llama
my style is shark, u aint even a parana
ur a garden snake, im an anaconda
howd i get this style? its a born with trait
i got bitches on my dick so i never masturbate
blowjob on the first or shel get no second date
im the type of guy that never likes to wait
producers want the full thing once they get a taste
im running this shit, like first place in a race
i eat the pussy up like spagetti on a plate


any better?

[Slim Zaddy]

no1 on the island got swaga like we do
i never fucked up so i never need a redo
do everything with ease, so everythings a breeze through
and yea, all these bitches r lovin my persona
i never sweat the small shit so fuck the under aurmor
fuck a bitch and leave her, who cares about the karma
shes suckin on my dick, she do it cause she wanna
she calls me mr. president, mr white obama
all my bitches swallo, they aint spittin like a llama
my style is shark, u aint even a parana
ur a garden snake, im an anaconda
howd i get this style? its a born with trait
i got bitches on my dick so i never masturbate
blowjob on the first or shel get no second date
im the type of guy that never likes to wait
producers want the full thing once they get a taste
im running this shit, like first place in a race
i eat the pussy up like spagetti on a plate


any better?

okay ,, it should'nt be posted here ,, and i said 12 lines not 18 ,, anyway ,, i will make up a thread and drop my 12 lines ,, and yeah this better for sho ..

[Docko]

i read all these raps but wasent impressed/
like your mum when results were positive from ur herpes test/
12 lines wont even let me express 11% of my mind /

i usually hear typical 16s but this guy decided on a typical 12/
knowledge is power and im rolling in wealth/
i got stealth to bomb ya/
reading this is like a honour i dont know why i rite this/
my rhymes like a bannana your probabbly gonna bite this/
my bad you'll probablly suck it wishing it was a dick/
i cant even count the 12 cuz my mind has turned off/
like your girl when you whip baggie shirt off/