Tash & Zaddy & Redzek - MotherFuckers Stare

[Emadyville]

zaddy I liked your lyrics, more so your first verse then your second but it's just hard to understand sometimes with pronunciation, just keep workin on it. Another thing would be the flow and delivery, christ said you sounded "soft" and I understand what he means, u kinda did, no hate or anything it just brings down the delivery some. keep workin

tuni your verses were alright, the quality of your mic or whatever showed but like big ax-d said it kinda made this more raw, and cut from the hook which made it pretty cool. your voice was very scratchy/robotic sounding, not sure if that was all quality or how u actually sounded, but that was kinda weird. Your flow was pretty good, not great but not terrible, you paused well at some places, at least showed u have an understanding of what u should be doing over a beat. keep workin

tash excellent job mixing this. hooks nice, except like people said the last line being slightly rushed, but overall great work homie

[Xray]

Zaddy you finally fixed up your lines, they're no where near as long as before, so good job on fixing that. Your lyrics flow better now, but your pronunciation is nearly impossible for me to understand what you're saying. It's because you need to work on your accent AND its your microphone. Much better verse then your previous work, but needs a lot of work. Didn't like the lyrics at all though.

Redzek your verse was good, an average Redzek verse, and it flowed good. But yeah your quality is still a major problem, cause I STILL don't know how you actually sound without your mic intervening.

And Tash that hook was ok but imo it sounds very amateurish, specifically because of the lyrics, the lyrics of the hook is flatout wack. And the flow of it is tooooooo basic.

[Le Tunisien]

Zaddy you finally fixed up your lines, they're no where near as long as before, so good job on fixing that. Your lyrics flow better now, but your pronunciation is nearly impossible for me to understand what you're saying. It's because you need to work on your accent AND its your microphone. Much better verse then your previous work, but needs a lot of work. Didn't like the lyrics at all though.

Redzek your verse was good, an average Redzek verse, and it flowed good. But yeah your quality is still a major problem, cause I STILL don't know how you actually sound without your mic intervening.

And Tash that hook was ok but imo it sounds very amateurish, specifically because of the lyrics, the lyrics of the hook is flatout wack. And the flow of it is tooooooo basic.

thanks for the in depth feed,much appreciated,
btw dont blame tash about the amateurish lyrics and the basic flow cuz its me who came with the lyrics and the idea of how to flow the chorus,i just recorded the hook and sent him and asked him to do it exactly like that and he did it well ^^

next song will be better i hope

[Slim Zaddy]

zaddy I liked your lyrics, more so your first verse then your second but it's just hard to understand sometimes with pronunciation, just keep workin on it. Another thing would be the flow and delivery, christ said you sounded "soft" and I understand what he means, u kinda did, no hate or anything it just brings down the delivery some. keep workin

tuni your verses were alright, the quality of your mic or whatever showed but like big ax-d said it kinda made this more raw, and cut from the hook which made it pretty cool. your voice was very scratchy/robotic sounding, not sure if that was all quality or how u actually sounded, but that was kinda weird. Your flow was pretty good, not great but not terrible, you paused well at some places, at least showed u have an understanding of what u should be doing over a beat. keep workin

tash excellent job mixing this. hooks nice, except like people said the last line being slightly rushed, but overall great work homie

thanks man ,, i'm doin anther song,, hope u will like my tone ,, in that ,, and thanks again for da long feed

Zaddy you finally fixed up your lines, they're no where near as long as before, so good job on fixing that. Your lyrics flow better now, but your pronunciation is nearly impossible for me to understand what you're saying. It's because you need to work on your accent AND its your microphone. Much better verse then your previous work, but needs a lot of work. Didn't like the lyrics at all though.

Redzek your verse was good, an average Redzek verse, and it flowed good. But yeah your quality is still a major problem, cause I STILL don't know how you actually sound without your mic intervening.

And Tash that hook was ok but imo it sounds very amateurish, specifically because of the lyrics, the lyrics of the hook is flatout wack. And the flow of it is tooooooo basic.

thanks man ,, for ya help and checkin it out ,, i will work on all dat next time ,, and i have allready lol ,, so hope u like my new verse , also with le .. and thanks again ,, much appreciated

I actually like this song tbh listened to it 2-3 times today

you guys are doin' something right

thanks coleon

[randomghost]

da hook is amazing..i luv it....zaddy did ok..delivery is nice...flow could be better...redzek ya gettin better time by time...keep at it bro...keep them coming guys

[Slim Zaddy]

da hook is amazing..i luv it....zaddy did ok..delivery is nice...flow could be better...redzek ya gettin better time by time...keep at it bro...keep them coming guys

thanks alot bro ,, glad u liked it

[Le Tunisien]

da hook is amazing..i luv it....zaddy did ok..delivery is nice...flow could be better...redzek ya gettin better time by time...keep at it bro...keep them coming guys

Thanks bro,im glad you liked my chorus ty for checking