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The Watchmen

Postby voice23 » Jan 11th, '10, 10:49

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Re: The Watchmen

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 11th, '10, 19:06

its asking me for a password to download, easiest one to use and best one on this site if you want people to give you feedback is Zshare.net it steams the song so we can all listen and give feedback without having to download every track. but please upload it to zshare and ill give feedback :y:
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Re: The Watchmen

Postby voice23 » Jan 12th, '10, 08:44

watchmen.mp3 - 3.52MB --got it..this is one of my more chill songs...not so much heavy spittin..jus vibin
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Re: The Watchmen

Postby Tranquil » Jan 12th, '10, 10:38

Beat Is DOPE!!! :o Im really fellin' this track, a nice smooth relaxing song :smoking: Where bouts you from man?
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Re: The Watchmen

Postby voice23 » Jan 12th, '10, 11:49

thanks--I did not make the beat...but I constructed the whole song an spit....I'm from Florida hommie
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Re: The Watchmen

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 12th, '10, 16:46

good track man, the beat is nice but, you flow nice fall off and rush a little here and there, lyrics are real nice, good delivery, nice track man stay active :y:
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Re: The Watchmen

Postby gutawafang » Jan 13th, '10, 07:45

That's motherfucking sick man. I like the title. I like the beat too.

And your singing is quite good man. Use less breathing or edit it.

Nice delivery, nice pronounciation. It will be dope if this is recorded proffesionally man.

Fucking awesome. :)
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Re: The Watchmen

Postby voice23 » Jan 13th, '10, 09:02

much appreciation peoples :coffee:
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Re: The Watchmen

Postby i4ill » Jan 14th, '10, 12:37

Nice choice of the beat...I like your style man flow sounds on point at most parts, delivery was tight you harmonized well the beat. singing wasn't bad at all, sweet track man...
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