by i4ill » Jan 14th, '10, 12:46
I like emotional shit so you get props for that directly...Your delivery sounds good. singing wasn't bad but with more practice you'll nail it. I loved the honesty and depth of the lyrics, although the rhymes weren't quite sharp...first line for example didn't have clear rhymes but emotions was there. Flow was kinda off at some lines, maybe if you re-do it you'll fix it.
but overall, it wasn't bad at all...

I'm the letters that alphabet never heard about, the words that the lines couldn't manage to gather, the lines that the verses failed to comprehend, the verses that no song would dare to embrace, the song that no pen would ever write down.