RedZek & Bar - I Don't Have

[Le Tunisien]

check it out

http://www.zshare.net/audio/70957065129294e6/

[Intro]
Ayo....Yeah ...this is Redzek (& Bar)
just listen.. (faggot!...check it...and go!)

[Verse 1: RedZek ]

i dont have all the swag of Shady
i dont have the success of jay z
i dont have the trust of my lady
this slut made me go fuckin crazy
i dont have the speech of obama
i dont have the craze of madonna
i dont have the :courage of cheguevara
the fame of rihana nor her drama
i dont have the childhood of marshall
i dont have the fakeness of the martian
i dont have to approach you with a caution
or have an option to change the motion
i dont have the thug power of 2pac
i dont have a hood like in D-Block
i dont have a gun called sixteen shot
or what 50 got,or what made him hot

[Chorus : Bar ]

we aint got the backing of a label
but on track we are so able
to spit sick bars we prove we're better
greatest up and comers not changing like the weather

[Verse 2 : RedZek ]

i dont have the Skills of young jeezy
i dont have the bitchness of a weezy
i dont have the ease to be easy E
u wanna please me,then please leave me
i dont have money just like bill gate
i dont have a Brother like the one got nate
i dont have time to waste, its too late
and this is true mate,im not fake as drake
i dont have the wife of nick cannon
i dont have a life like sarah palin
i dont have the rhymin style of annon
or yoshi's passion i dont like bannin
i dont have the arrogance of scotty M
i dont have the Problems of Eminem
i dont have the love of my friends
nor have to pretend,i dont have to be them!


[Chorus : Bar ]

we aint got the backing of a label
but on track we are so able
to spit sick bars we prove we're better
greatest up and comers not changing like the weather

[Verse 3 : Bar ]
he'll post the lyrics later

[Outro : Bar ] I Dont have it......i dont need it !

[B.A.D.]

good track

the idea is good but you didnt executed it right, some lines do flow and rhyme great, some you struggle a lot, and some just dont do it, like I said, is not bad cuz it is original, but needs a better touch to be perfect. the mixing again is bad, but makes it raw and underground which I like it!! haha, I miss those days in trshady when we all had a fucked up quality hahahah
the hook from bar is good, but hmm.. there something I dont love, I dont know what is it, I enjoy it but I dont completely love it hahaha
but his verse is sick, great flow, although I kinda struggled to understancd everything hahah, but I like the flow and what I could understand well, so overall sick verse

great track, fun to listen

[Slim Zaddy]

beat is cool man ,, i love it, liked da concept as BIG AXD says ,,,,,,, quality is bad , and ya both verses are cool man ,, , and bar i did'nt like da hook to be honest , but your verse is fire ,, like da way you flowed , there ,, sick verse bro ,,,,,,,, waitin for some new staff, from u ,, overall , it's a cool song,, if da quality was better , it will sounds better ,,, 8/10

[Le Tunisien]

good track

the idea is good but you didnt executed it right, some lines do flow and rhyme great, some you struggle a lot, and some just dont do it, like I said, is not bad cuz it is original, but needs a better touch to be perfect. the mixing again is bad, but makes it raw and underground which I like it!! haha, I miss those days in trshady when we all had a fucked up quality hahahah
the hook from bar is good, but hmm.. there something I dont love, I dont know what is it, I enjoy it but I dont completely love it hahaha
but his verse is sick, great flow, although I kinda struggled to understancd everything hahah, but I like the flow and what I could understand well, so overall sick verse

great track, fun to listen

lol i dont know anything about mixing to be honest rofl =P
thx for the feedback though,very appreciated,i hope next track will be better
thx zaddy too ^^

[Le Tunisien]

BUMP

[randomghost]

good track..ur quality is gettin better redzek...flow is ok...it seems ur struggling wid da delivery a bit....hook is good but kinda week delivery.......bar's verse is good....nice track...keep it up guys

[Le Tunisien]

good track..ur quality is gettin better redzek...flow is ok...it seems ur struggling wid da delivery a bit....hook is good but kinda week delivery.......bar's verse is good....nice track...keep it up guys

Hmm ok thanks for checking,appreciated

[gutawafang]

Lots of mispronounciations by Tunisien here but the flow is quite good man.

Bar's chorus is pretty good but I don't like it so much man. Prolly because of the ehcoing. Sounds random to me man. No offense.

And Bar's verse is very good.

I don't know how to critic much. I quite like this track.

[Le Tunisien]

Lots of mispronounciations by Tunisien here but the flow is quite good man.

Bar's chorus is pretty good but I don't like it so much man. Prolly because of the ehcoing. Sounds random to me man. No offense.

And Bar's verse is very good.

I don't know how to critic much. I quite like this track.

hmm ok,thanks for listening though

[i4ill]

Redzek's verses:
that was different and automatically you get props...Flow was simple true, but this shit aint about a flow pattern or complexity...The content is all what matters in here. I liked the emotions alot.
keep on doin' it.

Hook:
simply sick...sounds very fit for the song and performed professionally. Just for the hook this song gets 10!

Bar:
flow was sick, it didn't slip at all, seemed like it was united with the beat. I liked the aggressive delivery BIGTIME. Lyrically it was pretty tight too, had some ill rhymes there. I gotta admit though I didn't understand some bars cuz of the accent, but that's aint a big deal, I bet if I listen more to your shit my ears will get used to that accent...

keep it up guys...real talk.

[Arabian Shady]

tuna you gettin better and better son, i like the simple rhymes,straight to the point
good flow too
Bars verse was dope,flow,meaning, pretty damn good
Hook was dope yo, i digg it

[Le Tunisien]

tuna you gettin better and better son, i like the simple rhymes,straight to the point
good flow too
Bars verse was dope,flow,meaning, pretty damn good
Hook was dope yo, i digg it

thanks man