.::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

[Tash8]

wow thanks a lot for the feed guys...I wanna explain the reason for the stop where I say i will not lose, will not lose...everything i do with my lyrics has a reason

i end the verse saying
"and you can see why, i'll be fine in the meantime
untill we're old and senile, then you will see why"

as in telling you, i'll be fine for now but in the future i'm coming back with vengeance, which is why i take a break with I Will not lose, will will not lose...it's kinda like a pause as in we move to the future and then this comes out and says

"when you think I'm buried that's when I dig out my grave
then I'll grab the pen and turn and burn the fuckin page"


just to explain why i did a pause in the verse...

thanks a lot for the feed guys.

i think if u ended ur verse with " i will not lose,will wil not lose" it would sound a lot better,and that way we wouldnt feel the weird stop,thats what i think anyways

but that wasn't the point i was trying to do .. but it's ok it didn't come out right, got it thanks.

[Xray]

The hook ruined the track, I'm being 100% honest. Vet I wasn't feeling your verse, idk man you just sound too much of an imitation copy of Eminem to me. And multis being your main style of writing is what makes it look even worse. Your flow is always the same to me, you have 1 delivery, 1 flow, and 1 style of writing. I feel as if you need to switch it up A LOT. You seriously need to find an original style for yourself, otherwise I don't see you progressing much past what you are atm. No offense at all I'm just telling you how I feel.

And Tash wtf bro? why did you re-record this verse? This sounds like shit, the version of your verse you sent me is 10 times better bro, your delivery and flow is so much better on that version. This version is NOTHING compared to the other one you sent me. http://www.zshare.net/audio/71372071e00333ea/ That version is amazing, I have no idea why you would even pick the version you put on the final song instead of that version, just wow bro. I'm just saying that because I love that version lol.

Seriously bro your verse on that version =

[Tash8]

The hook ruined the track, I'm being 100% honest. Vet I wasn't feeling your verse, idk man you just sound too much of an imitation copy of Eminem to me. And multis being your main style of writing is what makes it look even worse. Your flow is always the same to me, you have 1 delivery, 1 flow, and 1 style of writing. I feel as if you need to switch it up A LOT. You seriously need to find an original style for yourself, otherwise I don't see you progressing much past what you are atm. No offense at all I'm just telling you how I feel.

And Tash wtf bro? why did you re-record this verse? This sounds like shit, the version of your verse you sent me is 10 times better bro, your delivery and flow is so much better on that version. This version is NOTHING compared to the other one you sent me. http://www.zshare.net/audio/71372071e00333ea/ That version is amazing, I have no idea why you would even pick the version you put on the final song instead of that version, just wow bro. I'm just saying that because I love that version lol.

Seriously bro your verse on that version =

ppl were telling me i should redo it, so i did.. my bad lol

[Le Tunisien]

@XRay, Vettori doesn't sound a fucking thing like Eminem

hmm i agree

[Tash8]

Tash, your writing was great but your verse didn't seemed natural almost robotic mechanics, the one X posted was a lot better imo

i like my other verse better too i agree damn.. which i kept that then