Punchline Kings (ft Aero Vegas)

[Strictt Ame]

www.reverbnation.com/stricttame
1st track on page

LYRICS:

Strictt Ame:
Its Ame in this bitch, out the gate you ripped
You aint half bad, more like 80 percent
Im rabid on tracks, you faggots are whack
Play for Belichick, wouldn’t get a Pat on the back
I chase pussy you just tackle a sack
Bitch Im fly, you just maggots who raps
Its no Mr. T that you got gay schemes
Its Aero & Ame aka the A-Team
Im ahead of time and you hardly nice
I’ll fire you Dames like Charlie Weis
So I say fuck you, and ya rants
Like cripples in Monopoly, don’t stand a chance
You pussies aint half of the man I am
I see through you boobys like a Mammogram
Ask ya chick, she sees Im illin
Shove my balls down her throat, Serena Williams
To me its nothin to put a nerd in the dirt
You got the cover of Madden, your sure to get hurt
All you veterans are rookies to Ame
Im out for blood like when Tookie was slain
I step on the scene and you wussies afraid
Cuz Im like VD, I leave you pussies in pain
Im always on point, Im playin the guard spot
Pass it to Vegas, Rehab at the Hard Rock


Aero Vegas:
If you can't stand the smoke I burn up next you
I see ya art a choke and you'll turn up vegetable
These herbs, sluts measurable when I mac work
Spin sleepin, Itune thru the lime wire then napster
Blast nerds backwards if they finnin to spar me
After im done all noses black like sniffing a sharpie
Bitches get off me and all these guys just bore me
You can only beat me to death if u die before me
Ya lines is corny shouldn't you be big already?
Sling a shell to ring ya bell you'd think dinners ready
Ya shit is steady, please ya gotta be kiddin
You'll pay for ya loss like a lottery ticket
Im monsterly vicious and the beats be fire
Ya chick won't come up for air like a deep sea diver
Don't hesitate or the shotty make you levitate
Ill throw dawg a bone and he wouldnt catch a break
Back on my grizzy in time stashing the dough
You dudes are like funny sex, the climax of the joke
Candy bar rappers get ate easy I spit jungle gyms
So sick that other kids will find mothers to punch n kick
You softer than a pillow ill find one to snuff'em quick
Clean as detoregent get'em a blank to Snuggle wit
Its SA and AV the dudes that you can't see
Our flows gotta currents, yours is stuck in a cantine
Pour'em out to floor face on the pavement
Can't kill us if you send an Aero strictly amein for Vegas

[Mr. Chambers]

song had a nice underground feel to it....what beat is this?

but yes...your flow was shakey..soemtiems you'd realllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyy stretch the syllables.....and it made you rush through the lines....then there were times where the pauses got really uncomfortable......work on just flowing.....but the lyrics were cool...some of the punches were really simplistic, predictable or just plain played out....but soem were really dope......my suggestion is try focussing more on your syllables and then on your complexity..............but not bad...how long you been rapping for?