Ruthless Feat. Big Ax-D - Ring The Alarm

[Tranquil]

Ok, this is more of an experimental song, i went on a story telling kind of theme. I chose Avatar to be my topic, so in a way i guess it is sorta like what Jay-Z done with American Gangsta. Big Ax-D is on the hook and does a killer job on it, shout out to you homie All feed is appreciated.

Link: http://www.zshare.net/audio/71986493cdcfe0d6/

[Robbie G]

Wow, you've improved a ton since the last song I heard from you. I think you have a really good rapping voice and I liked the flow on this. Ax also did a good job on the hook.

Keep it up

[Xray]

Word man you're improving bro. Your voice is becoming more listenable, and your flow is becoming much better. Your lyrics still need some work. I think the problem is that you're not really focusing on punchlines, multis or anything you're just letting it all out without thinking about it as much as you should. But its a pretty good song man, if you fix the lyrics and the flow at some points this would be good. And the chorus was dope Ax except some bits where you mumble your words as you sing. And I see your mixing got better too man. Glad my fellow Aus dude is getting better.

[LeeriX]

listening now...

turn ya vocals down a bit.. your alright, but your flow it seems a bit awkward in parts. Hooks not very good doesnt really sound like a hook. i never herd you before so i cant say youve improved or anything, but its an alright song. RTF.

[Tranquil]

thank you to everyone the next song i drop will have better lyrics and that, but thank you

[B.A.D.]

thanks for the comments