Kid Visions, nice name btw..
Intro- pretty dope intro. u got a sick quality mic.
A Lil' Sumthin- you've got an interesting flow. your lyrics aren't bad on this, it's like a combination of mainstream, but its better than standard mainstream. The beat's kinda poppy. pretty decent track.
The World is Deep- beat's dope as fuck. your voice is monotone, though your flow sounds natural. your lyrics aren't bad. the voice kinda ruins it imo, but ur flow is good on it.
Death on Arrival - lmao, i've heard so many remixes of that song. not bad remix tho. your lyrics are sick on it, the vocals are a little low tho. dope lyrics. dope.
Put it on everything - delivery's really weak on this. and u sound bored on it. meh.
The Fortune Verse - delivery's much better. you stretch a few lines tho, making a few rhymes awkward. good song tho.
Born a Bad Sin - nice lyrics on this, and ur delivery's fair. "your chick's off the richter" nice line. pretty decent song man. still got the monotone thing going tho.
Recognize Me - sick lyrics on this, and ur delivery's good. love the chorus on this. best on the whole album. sick beat too.
Big Deal - again your lyrics are nice, and ur flow is pretty good. ur delivery's still low, but nice track. one of my favs. on this
Different - holy fuck the quality difference jumps out at you. did you have a different mic? delivery, flow, beat is all ill as fuck. BEST TRACK on the album period. chorus
Overall - decent album, the first few tracks, and the last track make the album. you should have kept the quality of what the intro/last song was at. those were on a new level. the last track is dope as fuck, if you can hit that level on all of your future shit then you could become a sick as hell artist with refining. hit me up sometime, if your on that level i'll drop a line or two with you
keep that "Different" shit up.
to all of TR, download it if just for "Different", that track is a classic.