Ok, for my Tour in March where i'm performing over England, i have to perform a live track and since my group is two people, i'm on vocals. This is the track that i'll be performing but i wanted a basic recording and mix to it so i feel comfortable when practicing it so be HONEST in feedback in what can i improve to the song so the performance and finished track is good. It's missing elements and speech but this is like a template for me to refine
Track: This Is The Manic
Artist: Tornado
Length: 3:08
Produced & Mixed by: Tornado
Lyrics:
1st Verse
Now I be unleashed/ that manic that you meet
so savage when i speak/ I'm scattering you peeps
i'm battering the beat/ so no matter where you sneak
you get rap slapped right back/i'm a beast
fam i'm back to release/ the raw crack in the street
ain't talking bout drugs/ my rap rips a piece
of your carcass/ ripping half assed artists
making me narcious/ i came to spark this
who you start with?/ shit you become a traget
you're kinda like a kid/ swimming in the sharkpit
and i'm th e shakr/ and i'm gonna bask in
the fact that no rap act can outblast him
he's a bastard but since birth i was basked in
the darkness/ my words zip like darts quick
see i scar pricks shit, i leave a mark with
my fucking hard spit/ any emcee a target
fuck being physical/ look at what my lyrics do
now it is time/ you run like bitches
fam i'm itching to/ go build a ditch this dude
dishing you death yep. this is different to
the regular/ emcee murder dissecter
so it's time for action? i am director
cos if death is penalty for killing a melody
then i guess i must be wanted for a criminal felony
2nd Verse
So restless and edgy/ someone try test me
and you see these stains/ ain't spaghetti
i eat emcee's up then i spit them out
cos they so full of shit like fast food chow
you can't get in my league cos my presence of me
puts fear in your kneees so see me at ease
with a glee on my face, kill emcee's in the place
accept your fate, eliminate, no one's sicker than me
gripping the beat/ your ends that you meet
cause when we gonna meet/ a one on one facing
this kinda situation gonna be annihilation
i'm here to dominate, doon't try to violate him
my violent mind pacing, so vil but amazing
so wild aint no taming/ no chain can restrain him
releasing his rage in/ manical phases
so hail to the greatness/ or hell's what you're facing
so innie miney moe/ ippa dippa dation
mans kill at will/ no discrimination
process elimination/of peeps which face him
i'm the worst of both/ i'm freddy and jason
if you run, outpace him/ the stay in your haven
cos not even rastas can even outblaze him
the storm is staging the hip hop changing
event of the decade so fuck all the waiting
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