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[FAME]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nd-Mmfs5B38

My first attempt at rapping on my mic, lol. I find it decent but I can improve alot!!
Anyways thoughts? Ways I can improve? All comments are greatly loved.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

you have way too much hall in your recording...sounds like mixing is kinda fucked
also the flow was off...didnt really connect to wit the beat imo...
lyrics were pretty aite....delivery was from the main foundation okay..but try to control your voice/voice-level a bit better

[FAME]

you have way too much hall in your recording...sounds like mixing is kinda fucked
also the flow was off...didnt really connect to wit the beat imo...
lyrics were pretty aite....delivery was from the main foundation okay..but try to control your voice/voice-level a bit better

thanks, any suggestions on the mixing side of it? I use Cool Edit Pro.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

check the mixing thread in McLounge..maybe u find somthin in there...
or feel free to pm me a NONE MIXED acapella from you...and i can put my magic touch on it

[FAME]

check the mixing thread in McLounge..maybe u find somthin in there...
or feel free to pm me a NONE MIXED acapella from you...and i can put my magic touch on it

sounds good, I appreciate the feedback

[Tash8]

a female rapper, nice...u white?

ok your flow is offf, it's not even rapped to the beat..and mixing is awful...before u get those two things settled, you'll have a hard time doing anything

[FAME]

a female rapper, nice...u white?

ok your flow is offf, it's not even rapped to the beat..and mixing is awful...before u get those two things settled, you'll have a hard time doing anything

white brah

and yeah, it was my first attempt at it, so I know I have alot to improve on. But thanks for the feedback

[Tash8]

a female rapper, nice...u white?

ok your flow is offf, it's not even rapped to the beat..and mixing is awful...before u get those two things settled, you'll have a hard time doing anything

white brah

and yeah, it was my first attempt at it, so I know I have alot to improve on. But thanks for the feedback

damnnn awesome...i wanna hear another verse of urs, let me mix

[FAME]

a female rapper, nice...u white?

ok your flow is offf, it's not even rapped to the beat..and mixing is awful...before u get those two things settled, you'll have a hard time doing anything

white brah

and yeah, it was my first attempt at it, so I know I have alot to improve on. But thanks for the feedback

damnnn awesome...i wanna hear another verse of urs, let me mix

lol surely, I'm glad that I got several people that can help me mix now, since I'm pretty terrible at it I plan on getting a pop filter this weekend (when I get money) so that will help my mic too.

btw everytime I see your avatar I go

[Tash8]

btw everytime I see your avatar I go

apparently I look like him

[FAME]

btw everytime I see your avatar I go

apparently I look like him

Well then