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Cliff Hanger - Cliff Spit

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Cliff Hanger - Cliff Spit

Postby gutawafang » Feb 12th, '10, 03:36

http://usershare.net/kyxcn47bk4cg
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http://www.mediafire.com/?twhmrodnbw4

I do not walk alone, I'm beside my shadow
I don't drown in the ocean so fucking shallow
I make ears bleed, rapping over looping cello
I'm full with ammos, my lips pooping hellos

I'm breaking joints, seperating points
Your disappointments mistaken, what's the point?
I join the facts and the lies that I've made
Blending the truths and it lies on this pave-

ment, it's there you see, can't never be another me
Smother me, console me, love like you're motherly
Expect the unexpected, this is me hanging
On the cliff, and I'm staying there, clinging

To every hope, every ray of light I can visualize
I'm waiting for the moment everything purifies
Where's the applause? All I'm hearing is silence
What happened to all those gunshots in the violence?

Wait, what's going on here? What's wrong with me?
Cliff Hanger's here to sing a song with me
Fuckers stay on your seats, before I split
This time I'm gonna lay bodies on the floor with spit

Any feedback appreciated. :happy:
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Re: Cliff Hanger - Cliff Spit

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 12th, '10, 03:41

Terrible production. Your voice was kind of lost in the mix. To me, your timing sounds a little off on your flow. You should lock your syncopathic rhythms in tighter.
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Re: Cliff Hanger - Cliff Spit

Postby gutawafang » Feb 12th, '10, 03:43

GoodGirlsGetGutted wrote:Terrible production. Your voice was kind of lost in the mix. To me, your timing sounds a little off on your flow. You should lock your syncopathic rhythms in tighter.

Oh yeah, I used lousy mic here. I wanted to practice. I know man, I suck at mixing. :'(

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Re: Cliff Hanger - Cliff Spit

Postby gutawafang » Feb 12th, '10, 03:47

Thanks a lot anyways. :y:
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