NEW DANNY THOMAS - BETTER DAYS (DEEP TRACK)

[TheOfficialThomas]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BYILuAupeYY

LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU ALL THINK

[Solace]

You're lyrics are average. But perfect beat to use w/Chris Brown and all. But you had horrid delivery. Not to mention extremely bad mixing. Looping of the beat was bad. But keep at it with delivery as your flow (though boring as fuck) isn't as bad for a beginner. Work on smoothing it out though.

[TheOfficialThomas]

thanks for the input I think?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nyPl5z2j3uE

check that one out

[Solace]

Still bad. Delivery+flow=

And your lyrics are sub par.