Bar & Snow - There On Top (Produced by pro P)

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There On Top
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FR4zOGXQy5E&feature=sub

track with rapper called snow. check it out, sorry aint been on much computer problems hence why this is on snows youtube and not mine.

feedback really appreciated

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

omg sick pic boobs and headphones
okay now you should get more listens since i mentioned boobs haha
for the track...flow is fast and out-powers your voice towards the end...im not a fan of it but maybe some punch ins could be better in this case...
snow his voice control was better if i may judge it like that lol
sample is kool..love the beat
overall its an kool little track

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props man, but there were no punch ins on my verse

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

props man, but there were no punch ins on my verse

thats why i said it COULD be better instead of doin it all in one...
but yeah its your thread *fades away*

[Coherent]

Beat is real hot, really liked it. You flow was on point throughout... not a huge fan of foreign guys though, mostly because I can't understand the accents sometimes... but the lyrics I did get through were solid. Overall the track was really good, you just need to work on enunciation a bit.

[Tash8]

flow is dope, i like it but u need to raise the vocal and put of ur voice in the song..

definitely like it, love the beat..

snow has a cool flow, but his doubles are annoying as fuck, couldn't really understand a word he said though

[Redd Herring]

This is a dope track... its going straight to my ipod haha. Been lookin for some good underground smokin songs and this is def goin in that playlist. Lovin that hook too.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

props man, but there were no punch ins on my verse

thats why i said it COULD be better instead of doin it all in one...
but yeah its your thread *fades away*

aight kool man, i dont beileive in punchin in sorta annoys me when people do it. buti get what ya saying.

flow is dope, i like it but u need to raise the vocal and put of ur voice in the song..

definitely like it, love the beat..

snow has a cool flow, but his doubles are annoying as fuck, couldn't really understand a word he said though

yeh his accent is different from mine and he lives like 15 minutes away on the train so yeh even scottish people have dificulty understanding other scottish accents sometimes lol

thanks for the feedback guys me and him are liking what we are doin together and more importantly so is the fan bases, we got a mixtape coming out and doin a couple of shows together aswell so expect to hear him more lol

[Nick. Y]

you both have nice flow on this one.I think ,as Tash said, that you need to raise the vocals a bit and yeah that guy Snow sounds different from you,I too couldn't understand much from what he was rappin

[$0 R3@L]

the only thing i dont like is when you catch your breath it sounds like you've just spotted something suprising,once you notice it...its the only thing you hear.

Flow was ace,beat was solid.Didnt like snow that much,accent is just tooo strong and makes it hard to get without lyrics.

[Xray]

Flow was good, delivery needs work. I couldn't understand anything lol. Vocals were really low and because of that it made it really hard for me to understand. Snow I couldn't even get a word he said... Your delivery is whats holding you back, because you have a fast flow your delivery needs stepping up. Instead of being monotone throughout the track, you're gonna have to be more active on the mic. Switch up the flow at times, make it more fun to listen to. Other than that, it was a cool track.

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the only thing i dont like is when you catch your breath it sounds like you've just spotted something suprising,once you notice it...its the only thing you hear.

Flow was ace,beat was solid.Didnt like snow that much,accent is just tooo strong and makes it hard to get without lyrics.

yeh mixing aint great thats why the breaths are so prominint.


thanks yall for the feedback

[classthe_king]

This is dope track. Only problem I had is what everyone else has been saying, the quality/mixing and the delivery.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

This is dope track. Only problem I had is what everyone else has been saying, the quality/mixing and the delivery.

thx man