My Point of View [Breakout Second Single]

[Kez]

Alright, this is a song you can actually judge. This aint a throwaway track that isn't going on the album, this is going on the album. This is a song you can judge me on.

Beat's produced by Sinima. I know all the songs i've posted so far are made by like outside producers and unleased, but about half of this album is original production from either Ax or Tash.

Breakout is coming out next friday. So here's the tracklist for ya:

01. Game Over (Prod. by Big Ax-D)
02. Mr. Kez (Prod. by/feat. Big Ax-D)
03. If You Could Only Imagine (Prod. by Tash)
04. Around The Clock (Prod. by 2Deep)
05. Rapstar (Prod. by Big Ax-D)
06. Hill of Silence (Prod. by Big Ax-D, feat. Big Ax-D & Bar)
07. Eyes of Negativity (Prod. by Tash)
08. My Point of View (Prod. by Anno Domini)
09. Fahrenheit 92 (Prod. by Tash)
10. Bastards (Prod. by Big Ax-D)
11. Ahead of my Time (Prod. by Vybe Beats)
12. Worth Dying For (Prod. by Tash) - Remixed for release
13. End of Life (Remix) (Prod. by Snowgoons)
14. When We Were Young (Prod. by Tash)
15. My Day (Prod. by VTZ)
16. Life is Unfair (Prod. by Sinima)
17. Comedian (Prod. by Big Ax-D)
18. Aspire (Prod. by Tash)
19. Departure (Remix) (Prod. by/feat. Big Ax-D)
20. Tough Act to Follow (Prod. by VTZ)

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As requested here's the lyrics:

You who are rich, and who's troubles are few
May come around to see my point of view..
What price the crown of a king on his throne?
When you're chained in the dark all alone..

My point of view, so persuasive, never evasive
Full of hatred, logical, puts people in hospital
Not as cool as you'd like and it's unhospitable
A hip hop mystical kid who's head bops literally
What i think of you's needed what you're thinking of me
Is worthless from my point of view, but the sickness cuts deep
Little cunts breathe, they don't deserve to, my words fucking hurt you
I hope they do, i hope you slit your wrists to this, i curse you
My point of view is abstract, used to attack like anthrax
Already made that comparison but i don't care you fat twat
Slap a bitch down the stairs than slap her the fuck back up
Give her a mouthful, then demand a fucking meal and a snack, cunt
Got this wrapped up, i don't demand much, cause my tracks just
Deal with fat cunts without the need for violent acts, "bruv"
But if you don't feel that's enough or you wanna exact some
Kind of revenge, you could always try attempting to rap, shug!

[Hook]

My point of view is not something you'd agree with
I've burned all my bridges while you're standing underneath em
I'm not the rap Jesus, i'm the rap Jonah
Swallowed up by this world, the difference is i postponed the
Death of me, the digestion, i'd rather die yes, than
Put up with you motherfuckers, but i digress bitch
Cause my rhymes get the cunts straight diabetic
Divide them triametically if you want, the fire never
Extinguishes, forever blistering, smoke fills your nostrils
Once you put the CD in, it breaks you're like "what the
fuck?", but like i said in Superstar, now i've got ya
The hype around me's higher than the fucking world cup's is
Well that's hyperbolic, i am sorry truly, please forgive me!
Sense the sarcasm? If not, then please don't think it's
Fucking serious, cause i just took the piss, i don't apologise
I'm sick of all the lies, my shit will leave you horrified!

[Hook]

Guitar riffs, leave the audience retarded, as i harm them
If karma was real, i'd be a king and you'd be farming
I can get you pissed as fuck without going near the bar, pricks
You think this is a big deal? I haven't even started
If you're wannabe American, you could call this shit 'gnarly'
My radar peaked years ago, now you fuckers are hardly
Even on it, but you aren't breezed off absolutely and completely
You harmed me too much to be wiped from the hard disk
But the horrors that lurk in every drum and snare kick
Would scare kids, an 18 rated film that impairs vision
And leaves your auditory senses fucked beyond repair, shit
Unfairness is the flair that gives life it's posterity
But the sincerity is 100 percent true
So take note of me; cause this is what you could descend to
You fucked up my life, and i curse the day i met you
You can forget what you did, but i'll never forget you..

[Hook]

[Tash8]

by next friday you mean tmw? nvm just read the date...yo yo wanna let me have an exclusive preview since i produced a few songs on there?

i like this song, though i dont like it as a single...but nice beat and nice flow and all.

[Mr. Chambers]

i gotta be one hundred.....i barely understood any of it.....your flow and accent made it very hard to understand....

flow was sick sounding tho.....delivery....well

mixing sounded nice..and that beat was sick....sorry i couldn't be more help......

[B.A.D.]

hey, the vocals are a bit low compared to the beat, not much to worry about, but still worth fixing before the actual album release.

lol, Tash... we should've worked on a beat together for this album instead of having all our productions separate.

This is nice for a single man, Good Good choice of beat, you didnt got it from Sinima's soundclick page did you??.. doesnt sound familiar... either way very very good choice

you should also post the lyrics so we can follow up better cuz I agree with Chambers, the accent is heavy on this one... Im used to youre voice, but I can notice you also used English Slang on here, so I would like to listen to it Again but following the lyrics next time.

Very good track, good album material. Very enjoyable.

[Kez]

i gotta be one hundred.....i barely understood any of it.....your flow and accent made it very hard to understand....

flow was sick sounding tho.....delivery....well

mixing sounded nice..and that beat was sick....sorry i couldn't be more help......

I know what you mean lol, i was trying to go for a more English delivery and shit, stay a bit more local to my area and that. But i can get why it'd be hard to follow for those who aren't my nationality lol.

I'll post the lyrics soon

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

sounds like a sick track....delivery sounds like its good but the accent makes it hard to come across if you know what i mean...flow catches me at some points but then let's loose...and on and on..
well sample it sick....beat tracklist looks good man..

[randomghost]

beat sounds nice,,,,track is sick,.kez ur voice changed alot da track sounds old skool..flow and multis are amazing,..lyrics is nice...good delivery...energitic flow...nice track bro...i cant wait to cop dat tape look intersting

[Kez]

Alright lyrics are up

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first verse

starts of good second half of the verse your strugglinh to find flow to much stuff crammed in, lyrics are good just not spitten to what you can do.


second verse

a little better again your flow isnt shinning here and when your flow shines your naturual delivery does aswell but not feeling it hear, lyrics are great again

third verse

I can get you pissed as fuck without going near the bar, pricks

WTF WHO YOU FUCKING TALKING WTF WTF RAAAAA lmao j/k

you start this verse of how you were doing the first to but as you get into it you slow down and relax and flow a shit load better and the second half of this verse was the best on the track espeically last 4 bars.


overall

you tried to attack this beat when really all you had to do was mellow over with it, imo your flow was off alot and you tried to speed over it to much, that stopped your delivery coming through, your rhymes were dope as fuck the beat itself was sick the chorus was great sample used well, and your content was great, just the flow wasnt there imo. and you usually got such a naturual flow so i dunno if your trying harder with the lyrics and its puting you off a bit.

but if you are tyring to force the lyrics a bit dont man coz simple but with a dope flow is much better than complex with iffy flow.

[B.A.D.]

thanks for postin the lyrics... I enjoy it better now

yo, first verse is sick lyrically... but I think you say to many things on a same bar so its hard to follow up closely to the message...

[mcZu]

Your vocals are too low, I think if you would amplify it by 1.5-2 DB it'll sound better. Lyrics sound good, the flow slips at some spots due to too much words in a line. Delivery sounds dope, the accent didn't bother me that much, but I guess it's because I listen to UK hip hop quite a lot. Overall a nice track, I'll definitely check out the album.

[Kez]

Updated the tracklist, i think Anno Domini produced this, not Sinima after all.

[Jay-19]

I've never been a fan of this accent to be honest... and this song didn't make it better.
It's so hard for me to understand any of it, but luckily you posted lyrics, and they're nice man.

Flow is on point, delivery is nice also.

Beat and hook is good.

Not my cup of tea at all, mainly because of the accent, but you can't help it, I know.

Sorry if I seem a little negative here and couldn't give more in-depht feedback man...
Keep up the good work Kez.

[gutawafang]

Sick beat and lyrics. I don't mind the accent, it's Sajjad-y. I like it alot!