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unreleased verses

Postby Tash8 » Mar 30th, '10, 23:13

hey so here's a few unreleased verses:

The Way It Is:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/7440135437f8044b/

Don't Take Me Back:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/7440141825a15ea5/

Back Again (D.Dubs shouty):
http://www.zshare.net/audio/7440150483a2f00d/

Sisqo Body:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/74401918067ddc4e/

thanks guys :)
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Re: unreleased verses

Postby Jaz » Mar 31st, '10, 00:01

Just listened to the first one, but I like the way the chorus is put together. It could be adjusted a little and sound slightly better, and it's not really my style, but I can still tell that it's good. The verse was pretty strong toward the start, and finished okay, but I think it fell off at points in the middle.

Not a huge fan of the ending chorus, I think you should have made it the same as the start, and then done more verses :smoking:

I like it though. Good sort of crossover track. I'll probably come back and listen to some others.
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Re: unreleased verses

Postby Emadyville » Mar 31st, '10, 20:08

yo tamer did you send me all this shit? i know as i enter and the back again shit yes, but the other names didn't sound familiar. if so i'll then listen and feed ya :y:
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Re: unreleased verses

Postby Tash8 » Mar 31st, '10, 20:34

Emadyville wrote:yo tamer did you send me all this shit? i know as i enter and the back again shit yes, but the other names didn't sound familiar. if so i'll then listen and feed ya :y:


i think sooo but yeah listen again
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Re: unreleased verses

Postby Emadyville » Mar 31st, '10, 20:43

Tash8 wrote:
Emadyville wrote:yo tamer did you send me all this shit? i know as i enter and the back again shit yes, but the other names didn't sound familiar. if so i'll then listen and feed ya :y:


i think sooo but yeah listen again


word, i'll do that today sometime :y:
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Re: unreleased verses

Postby Tash8 » Apr 2nd, '10, 22:48

bumpp :o
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