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Ruthless - Shutterbug (Freestyle)

Postby Tranquil » May 10th, '10, 03:38

all i have to say, is that i stepped my flow up on this... :D feedback would be appreciated, and if u have a track, drop a link and i will check it out ;) oh and its on the beat for the song Shutterbug by Big Boi :flower:

Link: http://limelinx.com/files/9fb2832bcde95 ... 01acaf664d
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Re: Ruthless - Shutterbug (Freestyle)

Postby youngfire420 » May 10th, '10, 04:45

DAMN, that was a hot ass freestyle. Was definitely feeling the flow. Lyrics were super nice as well. Production was on point too. Wish it was longer though. VERY GOOD job on this man. Do more tracks like this. :y: :y:
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Re: Ruthless - Shutterbug (Freestyle)

Postby TripleNineThree » May 10th, '10, 05:00

Whoa man was that really a freestyle or was it written? You got some really good flow and delivery either way. I'm really feelin your voice too, you have a good rap voice and its sick :y:

The beat was also crazy good, I've never heard that song but I think i'm gonna check it after hearing you flow to it

Keep it up and keep dropping songs I'll deffinately be checking them out you got some really good replay value from the sounds of this freestyle!!

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Re: Ruthless - Shutterbug (Freestyle)

Postby Tranquil » May 10th, '10, 05:04

TripleNineThree wrote:Whoa man was that really a freestyle or was it written? You got some really good flow and delivery either way. I'm really feelin your voice too, you have a good rap voice and its sick :y:

The beat was also crazy good, I've never heard that song but I think i'm gonna check it after hearing you flow to it

Keep it up and keep dropping songs I'll deffinately be checking them out you got some really good replay value from the sounds of this freestyle!!

Think you could return the feed fam?? - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=86167

thanks man :happy: yeah it is a freestyle, i didnt write this down.. i just recorded it bit by bit :smoking: and yea, i will be dropping lots of songs soon.. and maybe an EP :shifty:
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Re: Ruthless - Shutterbug (Freestyle)

Postby _Ironic_ » May 10th, '10, 05:35

i told these cats once, ill tell him again

YOUR GONNA BE A PROBLEM SON.

dope shit son, real dope shit.

ill be checkin for the albums :y:
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Re: Ruthless - Shutterbug (Freestyle)

Postby Tranquil » May 10th, '10, 05:40

_Ironic_ wrote:i told these cats once, ill tell him again

YOUR GONNA BE A PROBLEM SON.

dope shit son, real dope shit.

ill be checkin for the albums :y:

haha, thanks bro :worship:
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Re: Ruthless - Shutterbug (Freestyle)

Postby Xray » May 10th, '10, 05:44

For a freestyle its not bad. But lyrically its pretty bad. Flow was good, delivery was alright too but need some work on balancing out your tone. Not bad freestyle though.
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Re: Ruthless - Shutterbug (Freestyle)

Postby gutawafang » May 10th, '10, 06:35

Holy fuck. :o

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Re: Ruthless - Shutterbug (Freestyle)

Postby randomghost » May 10th, '10, 11:14

damn son..love that beat :worship: classic shit...ur voice mixed and mastered well...nice flow...shit is good if its off the top :y: it would be better if u make it a song though with a hook :happy: ...keep them coming man :smoking:
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Re: Ruthless - Shutterbug (Freestyle)

Postby Tranquil » May 10th, '10, 11:30

randomghost wrote:damn son..love that beat :worship: classic shit...ur voice mixed and mastered well...nice flow...shit is good if its off the top :y: it would be better if u make it a song though with a hook :happy: ...keep them coming man :smoking:

im thinking about making it a full song now, with a hook and all :happy:
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Re: Ruthless - Shutterbug (Freestyle)

Postby Slim Zaddy » May 10th, '10, 11:44

beat ,, is so amazing ,,you flowed pretty well ,, ya delivery was cool most of the part but not all ,, lyrics were aight ,but i enjoyed it man ,, so yeah ,, gd job,,,

here if u can leave a feedback http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=86125
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Re: Ruthless - Shutterbug (Freestyle)

Postby Tranquil » May 11th, '10, 03:22

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