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Ruthless - You Should Be Dead

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Ruthless - You Should Be Dead

Postby Tranquil » Jun 17th, '10, 09:00

One of the first recordings with my new mic since my other one shat itself, im back bitches :smoking:

Link: http://limelinx.com/files/93b7795e30926 ... 3c33ce13de

Hope you guys enjoy :smoking: and leave some feedback if you can ;)
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Re: Ruthless - You Should Be Dead

Postby classthe_king » Jun 17th, '10, 18:01

Loved the beat and loved the 50 Cent chorus :worship:
I can tell you've gotten alot better though. Try some multis though now, they would make your song alot better
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Re: Ruthless - You Should Be Dead

Postby Liquid_Fangs » Jun 17th, '10, 18:14

I don't like the mixing, your voice sticks out from the beat too much. Pretty decent flow but as the poster above said throw in some more complex multis. Oh and eaze it up on the queef/fart stuff lol. Still pretty decent.

Can I have the instrumental with hook?
Ignorance is bliss and man I wish I was dumb
Cause mistakes are always hard to forget when you're young
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Re: Ruthless - You Should Be Dead

Postby j3andit » Jun 17th, '10, 19:30

dope. :y: :y:

yo man, this was really short, but it was dope

ill definitely check for u again.
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Re: Ruthless - You Should Be Dead

Postby Tranquil » Jun 17th, '10, 23:08

thanks guys..

@classthe_king - Yer i no that this song dosnt have multis in it, but when i started writting it, i wasnt to fased on them, so i didnt do any :p thanks for the feedback tho :flower:

@Liquid_Fangs - About the mixing, to me its the perfect volume, but to other people it mite not be, haha i will try fix it with my uncoming tracks ;) oh and yes, i will upload it and PM you the link ;)

@j3andit - thanks bro :b:
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