Cliff Hanger - Misery Business

[gutawafang]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EwgP4kyuWW0

Something off my first mixtape. First ever. Just sharing again.

No worries, my next mixtape will be a bomb. I was young. I mean, new to the audio scene.

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now i feel stupid for just finding out your a guy

delivery isnt strong enough need to put more into your voice give it a more distinct sound, lyrics were personel and nice, basic flow was there, keep up the work

[gutawafang]

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now i feel stupid for just finding out your a guy

delivery isnt strong enough need to put more into your voice give it a more distinct sound, lyrics were personel and nice, basic flow was there, keep up the work

Seriously? Ya just found out I'm a male?

Blahahahahahahahahaahaha!

Anyways, thank you for the feed man!

[B.A.D.]

you should post the lyrics, cuz its hard to listen, your voice is too low.

I never like re-makes or re-whatevers, this being your song on mockingbird beat. Hmm, I basically dont like non-mainstream artist on official beats ya know?, one reason being the flow for example, you dont get to experiment on your own, in this case you went in 100% with the original eminem flow on this song. the topic switches and its great, plus your lyrics are very deep, but you need more originality in temrs of the whole overall concept.

keep at it

[gutawafang]

you should post the lyrics, cuz its hard to listen, your voice is too low.

I never like re-makes or re-whatevers, this being your song on mockingbird beat. Hmm, I basically dont like non-mainstream artist on official beats ya know?, one reason being the flow for example, you dont get to experiment on your own, in this case you went in 100% with the original eminem flow on this song. the topic switches and its great, plus your lyrics are very deep, but you need more originality in temrs of the whole overall concept.

keep at it

haha man. i promise i'll get better man. i'll remember this advice. thank you very very much for the feedyback homie.

Lyrics is in the description.

[Solace]

Dude this wouldve been dope as fuck if you were louder...Forreal, you had a nice flow...Good rhymes in this and the content was all this. Good choice of beat, tho not original iit doesnt take much out anyways so nice. Hook was okay, but like i was said if you were louder and clearer this wouldve been really tight

[ahckiryL]

I know this an eminem forum but why everybody doin remakes on his beats...but yo ur quality needs work, couldnt really hear what u were sayin caz ur vocals were low and ur adlibs kinda made it hard to make it out what u said...ur flow sounded on point for the most part but emotion was very uninterested...just workin on projecting better and turnin up ur vocals so they dont get drowned out by the beat...keep doin ur thang 1

[gutawafang]

Dude this wouldve been dope as fuck if you were louder...Forreal, you had a nice flow...Good rhymes in this and the content was all this. Good choice of beat, tho not original iit doesnt take much out anyways so nice. Hook was okay, but like i was said if you were louder and clearer this wouldve been really tight

yeah man, volume is the shiznit I guess. man, thanks a lot for peeping man. I appreciate your time. I promise I'll improve a lot in my next shit.

I know this an eminem forum but why everybody doin remakes on his beats...but yo ur quality needs work, couldnt really hear what u were sayin caz ur vocals were low and ur adlibs kinda made it hard to make it out what u said...ur flow sounded on point for the most part but emotion was very uninterested...just workin on projecting better and turnin up ur vocals so they dont get drowned out by the beat...keep doin ur thang 1

Hello man. Yeah, it's always volume. I'll take note man. Thanks very much for listening man.