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Suicide

Postby Tornado » Jul 9th, '10, 22:29

Track: Suicide
Artist: Tornado
Produced by: Bankz
Mixed by: Tornado


second track from "Black Storm EP"

Lyrics:
1st Verse
Dear world, man i hope you can listen/ for one last time to to this bredda spitting
by the time you listen i'll be dead/ i just gotta express what's on in my mind
so listen as i spit you all the realness/ i ain't trying to make all your people go feel this
i don't belong here breathing on the planet/ so i did this, if you don't understand it
i'm sorry dad, never meant you no pain, but life is too hard, i'm losing my brain
and so, this was the quickest release/ go on with soul, my life will cease
and to my bros/ i know it's tearing you at your hearts
but pleae stay strong together/ and you both play a part
cos this life just aint a game for me/ for far too long it be plain to see
that maybe, if i can take it see/ i should just be life taking see
who knows tho, we'll meet again/ but know what we are, more than friends
Chorus
This is a Suicide (repeat)
2nd Verse
Fuck life as a whole, there ain't no soul/ this is for my people before i go
i hope your dreams'll all be achieved/ for any bredda now that's cool with T
cos so much badness looming outside/i gave my all but i couldn't try
some say i'm selfish, commiting this sin/ and also cause i have no religion
that i'll go to hell, well guess i'll see/ and your opinion don't mean shit to me
i don't have to be dead to say i don't care/ stop bitching now cos i'm outta here
so say goodbye for one final time/ before the bullet goes & enters my mind
cos..This is a suicide
you're in my circle, so jusy keep it true/ until the next time i'm seeing you

http://sharebee.com/af9d60fb
Last edited by Tornado on Jul 9th, '10, 23:28, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Suicide

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 9th, '10, 22:37

sorry bro..but the guy above me is right...
maybe not the worst...but flow is all over the place and quality is rock bottom bro lol
lyrics (and only cuz i could read 'em) and beat were the better parts of this track
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Re: Suicide

Postby Tornado » Jul 9th, '10, 23:28

I fail to see how my flow is bad, seriously. I aint saying shit's perfect but bad? It's a fucking grime beat and secondly that fuzz is from the beat not recording so its not a quailty issue

Instrumental
Suicide In My Mind _Remix_ _Instrume.mp3 - 7.55MB

Song (slightly remixed)
http://sharebee.com/af9d60fb

If you still don't like...meh

If you dont agree about me on the flow, you should hear the original lol :facepalm
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