by codyp » Jul 10th, '10, 02:36
Flow is dope. 9/11 seems a bit irrelevant now though.
I like the build up in intensities through out the song, though right now my mood is distant so I couldn't become emotionally involved. I noticed your accent in this song and I think it's wicked, don't ask me why.
My critical assessment:
I feel there was a bit too much trebble/noise in the voice recording. Sounded like you were either too loud/close to the mic, or that it was recorded on a cheaper mic. Though most people probably wouldn't notice this (as it was subtle).