ahckiryL- The Bank Job (concept track)

[ahckiryL]

This a concept track and well hope yall enjoy this shit...

THE BANK JOB
http://www.zshare.net/audio/78288326c2e271f9/
http://www.supashare.net/4iqt9gqjj5ov

[ahckiryL]

BUMP................................

[Jay-19]

This beat is fucking amazinf first of all!

Your flow is really nice man, and the lyrics are fucking nice and funny.
Hook is cool, I think it could be a little better though...

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

beat is on some nasty Ice Cube shit i like that
honestly..i think this was kinda a step down from your previous tracks...
everything was pretty cool...not sayin its a bad track
but your flow could vibe a lil more with the beat...
agree with Jay on the hook..some nice mixing or some crazy overdubbs could make it tighter..
overall allright track

[classthe_king]

Dope ass beat like they said. Lyrics were really good, great story telling and the rhymes were excellent too. Flow was very original and I loved it. Only thing I wasn't feeling was your delivery, I haven't heard any of your other songs so I don't know if it's your style, it just wasn't my taste. It's all good though, this was a good song

[97Civic]

i never really looked at any of your songs so i didn't know what to expect..

But seriously you got alot of talent and your a real gem...

This is music that would actually bump in my car goin down the road and enjoy it...

Very very good stuff one of the best artists on tr

[Terry_M]

Dope ass beat like they said. Lyrics were really good, great story telling and the rhymes were excellent too. Flow was very original and I loved it. Only thing I wasn't feeling was your delivery, I haven't heard any of your other songs so I don't know if it's your style, it just wasn't my taste. It's all good though, this was a good song

I agree, I wasn't big on the delivery on this track at all.

Otherwise it's dope.

[gutawafang]

Fucking nice flow man.