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Jay-19 - Everybody

Postby Jay-19 » Jul 19th, '10, 15:57

New track produced by CCC.
Check it out and tell me what you think! :b:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XxrylPVLoAA
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Re: Jay-19 - Everybody

Postby 97Civic » Jul 19th, '10, 16:17

Wow man...This song is really really good

Like not even from a rap stand point, but just from a musical stand point this is very very good song.. :worship:

This is the kind of music that makes me wake up everyday for real
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Re: Jay-19 - Everybody

Postby SajN » Jul 19th, '10, 16:40

It's alright.

You had good lyrics, and I really liked the chorus. Simple, but nice!
The only thing I didn't really enjoy was your voice, not because it's bad, because it's not, but because it was something monotone about it. Like you just rapped and rapped and didn't change a tone in your voice. That's the only part of the song I didn't like, which is sad, because I like the lyrics and the beat and everything else.
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Re: Jay-19 - Everybody

Postby Terry_M » Jul 19th, '10, 16:49

Now this was DOPE. The beat, the lyrics, the flow, all dope. Good fuckin job bro. :y:
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Re: Jay-19 - Everybody

Postby Jay-19 » Jul 19th, '10, 19:54

Thanks for the feed guys! :b:

And I get what you're sayin Sajn.
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Re: Jay-19 - Everybody

Postby Pllumi » Jul 20th, '10, 00:22

wow, that's damn good :y:
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Re: Jay-19 - Everybody

Postby SajN » Jul 20th, '10, 00:36

I said it's alright, but I say now it's better than alright. Still not enjoying what I pointed out though.
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Re: Jay-19 - Everybody

Postby gutawafang » Jul 20th, '10, 01:41

If you could SING better in the chorus, it would be perfect man. The fucking verses were good man. Nice flow and lyrics man. I like the lyrics. :y:
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Re: Jay-19 - Everybody

Postby Jay-19 » Jul 20th, '10, 11:44

Thanks for checkin' it guta! :b:
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Re: Jay-19 - Everybody

Postby classthe_king » Jul 23rd, '10, 03:38

Flow as perfect on this track, the way you rode the beat was perfect. Another great track :y:
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Re: Jay-19 - Everybody

Postby Jay-19 » Jul 23rd, '10, 12:20

Thanks class! :b: :b:
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