Bar Ft. Dee - Champion

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EHUxfaVDOgc

quick verse i threw on for a up and coming rapper to help it out

[classthe_king]

It's dope

And it's so nice of you helping out the new up and coming rappers

[Terry_M]

Dope track. I actually like the two tracks I've heard from Dee so far. And you layed down another good verse.

[B.A.D.]

I thought you didnt liked this kind of tracks... but well

the first verse is not good, the flow is there but the overall feeling of this guy brings nothing of interest. the lyrics are ok, what i understood, also very horrible mixing, kinda takes away the will to keep listening

ah fucking hook, end already!!... its horrible haha

what happened to your quality?, hmm, definitvely not your best but its good, what was that mexican line??... couldn't understand much....
well... here's what I can spot so you can improve, now that you too got "real" people/fans that listen to your songs, u need to fix up things like... the breathing, Its too heavy.. its getting in the way and I can hear some cigarrate problem there... I dont know if you or any of your friends smokes a lot near you, but youre going to end up like me and talking like fucking xzibit and its starting to get noticeable, cuz you are running out of breath.
- another thing, when you start to speed up some parts of the flow start to seem shacky, so try to organize the words better so you can do it smoothly. try to add words with the letter "r"... it gives it more unconscious speed and helps out with that.
- also If I may. I understand the whole points of doing this type of songs, u know me, many times I do them to attract more listeners, and its ok, but the last songs I've heard from you are all like this, its not bad, but your peers might lose respect for ya. of course if you care about it.... cuz if its the for money, being a lawyer its easy and pays good.. but thats all the advice I can give you.

good song, great for bumping in car except for the quality. hope this helps

[-Dee-]

Thanks for the feedback guys.
At the end of the day though, you gotta realise that I'm working with the cheapest possible equipment here. Infact, I'm using an Xbox 360 microphone to record so the quality really isn't gonna be great till I have more money.
As I said though, cheers for the feedback and I'll keep what you said in mind.

[B.A.D.]

Thanks for the feedback guys.
At the end of the day though, you gotta realise that I'm working with the cheapest possible equipment here. Infact, I'm using an Xbox 360 microphone to record so the quality really isn't gonna be great till I have more money.
As I said though, cheers for the feedback and I'll keep what you said in mind.

well... when I was young I was also recording with a playstation usb microphone, and I actually learned to mix it quite well. there's a few techniques I may remember if youre interested.

[-Dee-]

For sure man, I'd appreciate it.

[classthe_king]

What up Dee, welcome to the site

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Thanks for the feedback guys.
At the end of the day though, you gotta realise that I'm working with the cheapest possible equipment here. Infact, I'm using an Xbox 360 microphone to record so the quality really isn't gonna be great till I have more money.
As I said though, cheers for the feedback and I'll keep what you said in mind.

holy shit dee, good on you joining up to the site man, you want real feedback to help you improve keep dropping your shit on here, its were i learned my trade man, the guys are harsh but fair and defo help you improve make sure to feedback others aswell everyone will be up for helping you out with verses/beats if you help them ya know, youll work with some seriously talented guys and that can only be a good thing.


@ax-d - thanks man been along time since i had feedback like that, i do smoke and yeh i need to quit i aint started to try quit yet but i know i need to, im feeling it myself when recording. quality, my own mic own mixing always the same ya know. and thanks for the feedback.

on the bigger note of these styles of tracks, this is dee's track man im just featuring and yeh im hitting different styles lately, but the tracks getting released are just throw away tracks and stuff like that, nothing release lately is on the studio project me and snow are working on, im getting different fans now and i feel obligated to make them move and sing along in a club, so i wanne do stuff for them like this that they eat up, but im always going to stay on my style i just aint releasing any of it right now, i got alot of mind bending concepts lyrical shit in the drawer so to speak, but when i release now its looked at by alot of eye's if i hit that hard lyrical track and it flops i got real lyrical guys with there eye's on me and ill get eaten alive lol atleast when i do this stuff i got fans who love it so i like seeing them enjoy it.

but i still keep my stuff lyrical as i can when the concept fits

alright dee man let me tell you something quick mate
any fucking beat the scottish rip it so dam sick mate
i dont try intaginate but honestly ive had the hate
so now im saying fuck yall i rip it up at any pace
me and snow layed the blueprint now everybodies coming
like its towards the whore house that everybodies running
and im curving
black daggers for the wack rappers
there all bitches and my hobby is to smack slappers
say im durex to see if ya'll can get it
coz im durible reliable and my flow is pure excellence
the tennamints im wrecking in im grabbing legs n spreading then
injecting in adrenaline a swine like the mexican
six sides like a hexagon but you cant break one
already fucked up this game but they act like a fake nun
so i take none coz i dont need to be protecting this
smack you with my right gaurd, coz i aint fucking sweating this

you know, im still keeping it above average in my eye's and im always going to be hitting multi's wordplay and trying complex stuff when its time to express it. hope you check out the studio project man when its done