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Re: The Slaughter

Postby Xray » Jul 25th, '10, 06:14

Dude this track is tight as fuck. First time hearing you, and I can truly say I was amazed. You sound inspired as fuck, all that Rhyme Asylum shit def got you in the right path. I can hear your Dibolic influence, a lot, lyrically especially. Keep doing what you do tho, you're getting very well at it.

I can't understand some peoples feed, you don't have much of a breathing problem. Flow was dope, delivery was dope, lyrics were NICE, and a very dope beat. If this had a hook and a 3rd verse, it would of been crazy. Looking forward to hearing more from you.
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Re: The Slaughter

Postby Solace » Jul 25th, '10, 06:20

^^This is the old version I showed you the newer one
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Re: The Slaughter

Postby classthe_king » Jul 25th, '10, 15:30

Xray wrote:Dude this track is tight as fuck. First time hearing you, and I can truly say I was amazed. You sound inspired as fuck, all that Rhyme Asylum shit def got you in the right path. I can hear your Dibolic influence, a lot, lyrically especially. Keep doing what you do tho, you're getting very well at it.

I can't understand some peoples feed, you don't have much of a breathing problem. Flow was dope, delivery was dope, lyrics were NICE, and a very dope beat. If this had a hook and a 3rd verse, it would of been crazy. Looking forward to hearing more from you.


Damn, that means alot. Anytime you wanna collab hit me up :worship:
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Re: The Slaughter

Postby dR3 » Aug 6th, '10, 21:55

First time hearing a track of yours, and it's excellent. Lyrics are crack, and the flow is fine to me. You just need to work on your mastering skills.

Keep it up! :b:
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Re: The Slaughter

Postby classthe_king » Aug 7th, '10, 20:58

Thanks alot Dr3
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