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'Delete Destiny' Iphorill Ft. Second Hand King

Postby i4ill » Aug 30th, '10, 10:01

Another grunge-rap song, this time featuring my man Second Hand King

First Verse: Iphorill (i4ill)
Second Verse: Second Hand King
Third Verse: Iphorill
Hook: Iphorill
Beat Produced By: Iphorill

LISTEN: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplaye ... 81415&q=hi
I'm the letters that alphabet never heard about, the words that the lines couldn't manage to gather, the lines that the verses failed to comprehend, the verses that no song would dare to embrace, the song that no pen would ever write down.
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Re: 'Delete Destiny' Iphorill Ft. Second Hand King

Postby Emadyville » Aug 31st, '10, 04:14

This isnt bad. The beats pretty good, you're first verse had some good multis but the flow seemed off at a lot of points. The other dudes flow was pretty good, and you were better on the rest of your verses. Mixing was alright, I thought the quality was somewhat weak tho. Overall not bad, keep working :y:
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Re: 'Delete Destiny' Iphorill Ft. Second Hand King

Postby i4ill » Aug 31st, '10, 13:17

^what's wrong?

This isnt bad. The beats pretty good, you're first verse had some good multis but the flow seemed off at a lot of points. The other dudes flow was pretty good, and you were better on the rest of your verses. Mixing was alright, I thought the quality was somewhat weak tho. Overall not bad, keep working

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Re: 'Delete Destiny' Iphorill Ft. Second Hand King

Postby i4ill » Aug 31st, '10, 13:18

ah...never mind "PINK", I just noticed the name...
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