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Jay-19 - Just A Rapper (Full Song)

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Jay-19 - Just A Rapper (Full Song)

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 3rd, '10, 16:20

This isn't finished yet, 2 of my homies are about to spit on it too, but I just wanted to know what you thought about my verse.
It's over the Lac Motion (Cashis) instrumental.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aGbnKp6OvZk
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Re: Jay-19 - Showtime

Postby classthe_king » Sep 3rd, '10, 19:57

That was dope man. I didn't really like the beat much but your flow was killer. Expecially at the end of the verse. The flow on the last 6 or so lines was awesome. Keep it up man.
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Re: Jay-19 - Showtime

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 3rd, '10, 20:10

Thanks for checkin' it out class! :8)
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Re: Jay-19 - Showtime

Postby Mr. Chambers » Sep 3rd, '10, 23:55

this was nice

nice lil concept..flow was decent...few slips here and there..nothing major.....that beat is epic....a lil too slow for me..but still epic...

good shit tho
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Re: Jay-19 - Showtime

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 4th, '10, 13:40

Thanks chambers...


And I've decided to this all by myself instead. THought of some dope lines last night so it's gon' be a solo track now. :8)
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Re: Jay-19 - Showtime

Postby Weather Man » Sep 5th, '10, 19:40

:worship: :worship: This is sick, can't wait till you finish it.
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Re: Jay-19 - Just A Rapper (Full Song)

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 5th, '10, 22:36

Finished it guys, so give the full song a listen and tell me what you think... :8)
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Re: Jay-19 - Just A Rapper (Full Song)

Postby dR3 » Sep 6th, '10, 02:54

Wow, this is surprisingly good. Love the flow, love the pronunciation.

Again, the hook is kinda plain, try to make it more energetic (so it stands out more).

Keep it up!
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Re: Jay-19 - Just A Rapper (Full Song)

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 6th, '10, 09:48

I have been looking for that instrumental for a long ass time, I even forgot what I wanted to do over it :shakehead:

you should maybe mix the beat a little cuz it sounds to harsh on speakers, like normalize it and add a simple mastering to avoid the wave peakings.
I liked your verse, very powerfull, I've heard better flow from you, but its still good, not so original tho'.

I love your flow on the chorus, but it needs more, its very well written and perfromed, but not entertaining.

nice ass lyrics :y:
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Re: Jay-19 - Just A Rapper (Full Song)

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 6th, '10, 11:50

Thanks for the feed guys, I'll think about what you said next time. :y:
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Re: Jay-19 - Just A Rapper (Full Song)

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 9th, '10, 18:40

Bumpin'... :smoking:
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Re: Jay-19 - Just A Rapper (Full Song)

Postby Xray » Sep 10th, '10, 18:14

Oh shit this was chilllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll music.

Nice to bump to when you just kicking it back, chilaxing.

Lyrics were on point, flow was good throughout, altho I expected you to spit faster maybe, not like it took anything away, it just would of made it better. Nothing more to say than I enjoyed this. Nice track, John Cena's cousin. :shifty:

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Re: Jay-19 - Just A Rapper (Full Song)

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 11th, '10, 14:14

Thanks for the comment Saj! Appreciated! :b:
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Re: Jay-19 - Just A Rapper (Full Song)

Postby Steve Spag » Sep 11th, '10, 21:49

Great track man, very chill!
I was never really a fan of this beat but you made it pretty enjoyable!
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Re: Jay-19 - Just A Rapper (Full Song)

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 12th, '10, 14:15

That's what I'm talkin' 'bout Steve... :staticsmoking:
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