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Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
here u go manBig Ax-D wrote:fuck's wrong with youtube. the song doesnt load up![]()
put it on usershare man
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
i got wat u mean bro..yeah its true...ama look for a producer and come up wid good concepts...thx for the breakdown broBig Ax-D wrote:Hmm.. damn... I dont know man
I mean, you flow is great you've never had a problem with that, u can flow good, your voice is definitively unique, thats what helps your style also be unique, and you know how to write lyrics perfectly and execute them in a professional way. you also have excelent quality in your mixing and everything sounds clear.
but the song itself its not interesting at all. Soundclick beats get you no-where, they limit your creativity, specialy E-Motion-L. everybeat sounds the same, and if you go to youtube you'll find at least 50+ songs with this same beat. the hook is catchy, but its plain. nothing at all.
like I said, as a rapper you have it all, the style, the flow, the voice, the lyrics, the emotion, the delivery. something many people lack. but you are missing one thing, the concepts man. really, you have to get producers for specific songs, and you have to get a specific beat for an idea, and develop them together. instead is just going to be another average semi-club track with no replay value at all.
you need to clarify the message man.
hope this feedback helped you out
thx alot bro...ama start to change my content and concepts and beats as wellKez wrote:Damn Ax just summed it up perfectly for me lol
The track's enjoyable to listen to, you always are, i love the way your voice sounds on tracks (no homo) but in terms of content it's always kinda similiar lol. That said the track's still very smooth to listen to and i've gone back to it a fair amount already since
here u go bro :Weather Man wrote:Doesn't load up for me,
wow phantom ur alive!!Phantom wrote:youve improved alot from the last time i heard you, i really enjoyed this track bro just wanted to say hey and see what you been up 2 and give you props for getting so much better. content and everything totally went up from the last time i heard a song from you, good shit!
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