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Up All Night Freestyle Ft. B-don

Postby Mr. Chambers » Sep 14th, '10, 04:23

it was gonna be on Suck It Bitch...but he asked if we could scrap it and do something else...soooo

so yea...i think you'll be surprised by this tape...i'm switching up the flow slightly on some songs....

http://usershare.net/4zdpxtdznkyb

BTW b-don's a problem
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Re: Up All Night Freestyle Ft. B-don

Postby classthe_king » Sep 14th, '10, 04:27

I was feelin B-Don's verse but he really needs to work on his delivery.

I liked your verses too but I got kind of bored. Your delivery was more laid back then normal
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Re: Up All Night Freestyle Ft. B-don

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 14th, '10, 08:50

is B-don the one always commenting on your facebook status?? lol. he has a good flow, but he sounds struggling to rap, like he can't breath, hurts on his delivery. on the second verse his lost lost a bit of gold, but I did like one line a lot "we in front of you, how can we talk behind your back". I like it, but definitevly needs to work on his overall style & delivery.

mr. chambers, I loved your first verse, great way to turn the track on, and you sound really natural on the beat, its fits your voice, style etc..., lyrics up there, I like em, specially on your second verse, the punches seemed more impacting, flowwise first verse was excelent, second verse I think you were tryng to switch it up a bit, but I dont know if it worked. anything to fix?... not really, this was a great track, I'll download and listen to it very often, I like the general vibe from it.

great work both :y:
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Re: Up All Night Freestyle Ft. B-don

Postby Mr. Chambers » Sep 14th, '10, 19:43

^thank you very much

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Re: Up All Night Freestyle Ft. B-don

Postby Tornado » Sep 14th, '10, 21:19

you both did a good job with this, B-Don was good, especially in places. Like Ax mentioned, that line about "talking behind backs" was nice but dont know wat else to say. definite replay value for a freestyle
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Re: Up All Night Freestyle Ft. B-don

Postby Solace » Sep 14th, '10, 22:46

I enjoyed it :y:
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Re: Up All Night Freestyle Ft. B-don

Postby Weather Man » Sep 15th, '10, 23:01

This was pretty good, not bad. Your voice seemed like it dragging a little bit, but ieno that might just be but overall nice beat, it's nice :flower:
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Re: Up All Night Freestyle Ft. B-don

Postby Mr. Chambers » Sep 16th, '10, 17:43

good looks on listening....tape coming real soon
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Re: Up All Night Freestyle Ft. B-don

Postby dR3 » Sep 16th, '10, 18:32

This is pretty good, digging the beat. Both of you did a good job on the flow and delivery, lyrics are nice, nothing extraordinary tho.

On another note, I've been bumping Sticcy Flow all day, that shit's off the hook. I just found out about it, and I'm glad I did, lol.
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