Jay-19 - Don't Stop Until It's Done

by **Jay-19** » Sep 27th, '10, 16:13

Another track I just finished, check it out if you want to!
In my opinion, this is my best track in a long time!
Holla if you want a download link...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h7PMyjyyxkY

by **Tha Q** » Sep 28th, '10, 15:43

I like the beat and the fact your flow is uptempo and upbeat...sounds cool...

However, delivery was a bit monotone...add a few more inflections in your voice and it'd be dope

also...the singing on the hook was a bit pitchy...if that was purposely done, disregard the feed...otherwise, it was mixed well

good overall man...jus a bit more polish and it'd be dope

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by **Jay-19** » Sep 28th, '10, 16:52

Thanks for the feed Q! :b:

Website · by **Solace** » Sep 28th, '10, 21:54

I didnt like it tbh...Everything you've dropped before murders this.

by **Jay-19** » Sep 28th, '10, 22:18

Solace wrote:I didnt like it tbh...Everything you've dropped before murders this.

Yeah... I think it's a little different from what I usually drop.

But thanks for checkin' it out man! :b:

by **B.A.D.** » Sep 29th, '10, 05:07

hey man, u need to fix up the quality there. sounds too dirty and too hissy.
I didnt like this song as much as the others. but I guess its a matter of taste, the beat is nice tho and your flow is great. lyric wise, u can do better than that, my fav verse was 2, specially when u switch up the flow.

another thing you should do for the hooks is overlay it with an extra layer. cuz I know you do 2, but you need an extra for the hook and also switch the reverb to a wetter one.

by the end of the song I started to like it more, but yeah

keep at it man :y:

by **Jay-19** » Sep 29th, '10, 12:24

Big Ax-D wrote:hey man, u need to fix up the quality there. sounds too dirty and too hissy.
I didnt like this song as much as the others. but I guess its a matter of taste, the beat is nice tho and your flow is great. lyric wise, u can do better than that, my fav verse was 2, specially when u switch up the flow.

another thing you should do for the hooks is overlay it with an extra layer. cuz I know you do 2, but you need an extra for the hook and also switch the reverb to a wetter one.

by the end of the song I started to like it more, but yeah

keep at it man

Thanks for the feed bro.
I'll keep what you said in mind. :b:

by **TheWeirdoIsBack** » Sep 30th, '10, 19:29

The song itself was pretty nice, I like the beat choice and the flow was spot on. The delivery was kinda boring though man, especially for this type of track. The lyrics weren't really anything mind blowing, but they weren't bad. Decent track overall though, keep it up :y: